ButterflyShida

'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Bonus Prompt

First Impression: 8/10
Typography: 7/10
Textures, stock: 8/10
Colors: 10/15
Pictures: 10/15
Technique: 15/20
Mood/Theme: 15/20
Bonus: 5/5

Total: 78/100

Comments: This is very cute. I love the fun feel to it. I definitely understand the story you’re trying to tell as well as the direction. I love it all. The animation is nice but I wish I could see the final product for a little longer than a quick second. Try having a five second hold on the last frame to sum up the entire finished entry.

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First impression [8/10]
Typography [8/10] I don't like the "Bunny" font, but the "Love" one was really nice, also I like how you put the credits in the ribbon line
Textures, stocks, etc [7/10] The ribbon is with a very bad quality and I think the first big heart that appears on the right is unnecessary.
Colors (Too colorful, not matching?) [15/15] Great choice of colors
Pictures [12/15] The characters' photos are nicely chosen, though because of the .gif they have a slightly distorted quality; they are also well placed and cut, but you can see the credit text on the girls (xD)
Technique [15/20] I think I would have liked it better without the .gif effect, but overall it's nice

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3