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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Prompt 4

First Impression: 6/10
Typography: 6/10
Textures, stock: 7/10
Colors: 10/15
Pictures: 8/15
Technique: 8/20
Mood/Theme: 10/20
Bonus: 5/5

Total: 60/100

Comments: I have mixed feelings on this poster. I like the pictures you used but the blending isn’t very good, plus I don’t think the busy background compliments the main photos like it should. The font coloring and style match well with the colors used through the poster but I do not like how it’s animated. If you’re going to animate, do it in a fashion where it doesn’t become frustrating. The clinking and fading of the title and quote doesn’t seem appropriate. You could have set the frames to hold for more than a quick second. I actually would have like it better without the animation all together.

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First impression [7/10]
Typography [6/10] The fonts are nice, I love the quote (it's from one of my favourite songs x3), but the bright shadow on the title is innappropriate and I think it would have been better without the animated effect
Textures, stocks, etc [7/10] The two .pngs next to the title don't really match with the soft look of the other props and are somewhat randomly placed. The background is a sea and a forest blended toget

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3