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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 4, Prompt 6

 

First Impression: 8/10
Typography: 8/10
Textures, stock: 9/10
Colors: 13/15
Pictures: 14/15
Technique: 15/20
Mood/Theme: 15/20

Total: 82/100

Comments: I have one word to describe this poster. Beautiful. Beautiful blending, beautiful lighting, the stock used was very fitting. Clouds, heaven. I totally get it.  Everything tells a story which is so important. It’s lovely. I like the love and the placement is perfect but I wish it were a lighter color. The black just seems off putting and doesn’t mesh well with the light colors of the background. A white would have been nice then a shadow around the lettering to make it stand out. That’s my only compliant, other than that, great job.

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First impression [8/10]
Typography [7/10] The fonts used fit with eachother; you could have made the quote and title joined since 'heaven' is part of both; the black color doesn't actually match with the white background and very light and soft characters.
Textures, stocks, etc [10/10] The cloud texture is blended perfectly with everything; I don't think it lacks anything else.
Colors [13/15] The characters are a little bit too bright (or maybe it's from my computer ._.) and I already talked about the title.
Pictures [14/15] In some places the girl is a little too erased, but overall the placement, quality and blending are great.
Technique [17/20] The graphic is very pleasing to t

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3