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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 2, Prompt 6

First Impression: 8/10
Typography: 8/10
Textures, stock: 8/10
Colors: 12/15
Pictures: 12/15
Technique: 14/20
Mood/Theme: 14/20

Total: 76/100

Comments: I like this, it definitely tells a story. I love the photo cutting, very clean and the quality is clear. Beakhyun’s picture seems to be sized weird but that could be over looked. I like the quote but I feel like it’s a little too long, it won’t hurt to break it down a bit. I like the title placement and the font style fits well with the background photos.

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First impression [9/10]
Typography [6/10] Love the title, though it's a bit too burnt out. The quotes are just wrong on so many levels (><) and I don't understand why the text over the girl's head is placed there and what its purpose is.
Textures, stocks, etc [10/10] The choice of props is very good and they are all well blended.
Colors [11/15] I see you tried to even out all the color schemes, but you can still notice the difference between all the characters.
Pictures [9/15] The quality of the girl is not very good, Kai is cut out badly and Baekhyun is awkwardly stretched. Also the placement is kinda random, you could have done a better job on that.
Technique [12/20] I already talked about the cutting, the blending of the background is superb, I really like it, the overall placement of the props (except the character

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3