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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Prompt 2

First Impression: 8/10
Typography: 9/10
Textures, stock: 8/10
Colors: 14/15
Pictures: 13/15
Technique: 15/20
Mood/Theme: 15/20
Bonus: 5/5

Total: 87/100

Comments: This is cute and fun. I love it. The way you used the bonus pic was really creative and it helps set the mood of the theme. Nice light colors. I’m not crazy about the pictures of the fake fruit, I would have liked it a lot better if you used real pictures like the one in the photos, it just seems to clash. I also would have liked it better if Taemin was bigger, he kinda gets lost in the fruit.  The font was simple but kinda perfect in a way.  Nice!

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First impression [8/10]
Typography [7/10]The font matches the theme, but you could have made the typography a little more playful
Textures, stocks, etc [7/10] I really like how you used fruit .pngs too instead of just the given picture and the background texture is well chosen
Colors [13/15] The colors fit well
Pictures [14/15] Good quality, very well cut out and the placement is a good idea
Technique [15/20] I like the way everything is placed; the raspberries on the left are cut out weirdly; you could have cropped some of the empty space away
Mood/Theme [18/20]

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
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#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3