A boy on the train on the first day of summer

M.B.B.

 

DARA

 

 

Flashback

 

 

Being petite has its disadvantages especially when you’re on a commuter train during rush hour. I was pushed to the far side of the train, my back against the glass. I was hugging the shopping bags in front of me to prevent myself from getting crushed by the incoming passengers.

 

I was busy observing the other passengers as the train filled up. Watching couples whisper to each other, holding hands, having their sweet moments. I often wonder whether I’ll become one of them, a PDA couple. But being an ice princess and having no sweet bone in my body, it was probably a not ever thing.

 

On the next stop, a wave of passengers entered and I was suddenly aware that a boy about my age was pushed to stand in front of me. He was wearing a hood over his black tousled hair and had earphones on. I noticed that he was wearing a silver stud earring on his right ear. He looked a little scruffy. I never really noticed guys before, not even the cute ones in our class, but his presence seemed to beckon my attention.

 

He must have felt me staring and looked up at me. The instant he looked up, I felt my breath catch. He had thin lips which curved into a half-grin and he had the darkest eyes I’ve ever seen and I felt those eyes on me. I don’t know how long we held each other’s stare but suddenly another wave of passengers entered and pushed him towards me. 

 

 

 

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Tariki_inday #1
Chapter 24: Bom ?
crabbybatty #2
Chapter 24: This is heartbreaking in the most beautiful way. I am crying but not with a heavy heart.
Unixai21 #3
Chapter 24: Oh my this is so beautiful... Thanks authornim
3shhaaa #4
Chapter 24: Reading this for the second time!! It still gets to me.. love this story..
3shhaaa #5
Chapter 24: Love the story!! Thanks!!! ❤️❤️❤️
ddublin #6
Chapter 24: Well written stories is YOU! Simple but heartwarming. I can say you really like poetries. Godbless you and more stories to come. Im a fan.
TOPalmond #7
Chapter 24: Sorry unnie, I spammed every comment sections in your fics bcs after a year not reading any fic on aff (bcs I need to graduate), I re-read your fanfic all over again. Thank u for ur beautiful stories :)
TOPalmond #8
Chapter 24: I love your statement in every fic that u wrote, "Daragon love will always continue..."
#nevergiveup
wenkie0414 #9
Chapter 24: what a lovely story, and it made me cry a lot...
Gotcha101 #10
Chapter 24: Finished!! And I love it <3