Law #10 - Perceptiveness is Key.

Once Upon A Time.
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Chapter 11; Law #10 - Perceptiveness is Key.

 

 

NARRATOR'S POV

 

Sooyeon tried to calm her racing heart. She was alone. How did this happen?

Never in her life had she been helpless. Jeon Sooyeon had always been an independent lady, she needed no one to back her up. She was always the lone wolf.

She had no idea what to do.

Calm down. Breathe. She recited, trying to think clearly. You're Jeon Sooyeon. You can overcome anything, without help-

And then it hit her. She'd been selfish her whole life. Was this her punishment? Right then, she needed help. She couldn't do this alone.

So this was her lesson to be learnt.

Instead of wallowing in self-pity, though, she brought herself to stand. She needed help, but she wasn't about to sit around and do nothing in the meantime. She let out a loud breath, running a hand through her hair.

She blinked when she realised her hair seemed longer than expected - and then she gasped. How could I have missed this?

Behind her, her reddish hair flowed, long and majestic, all the way to her feet and curled into  a pile on her bed. She stood up, somewhat intrigued, trying to gather it in her hands. I'm going to get split ends at this rate.

As she got her thoughts straight, she surveyed the room. Empty, except for the sad excuse for a bed in the corner and a small window that showed the lovely scenic view of the forest. She approached it, and looked down.

The tower was made of stone, with little breaks in the stone that couldn't have been able to support her weight.

She wracked her brains for a solution but could come up with none. Sighing, she sat on the edge of the bed, which creaked when she sat on it. Sooyeon thought back to before she passed out, and vaguely remembered a fire in and a small, godforsaken green pea that haunted her thoughts.

Her brows knit together in anger as she thought of the only candidate who could be behind it. 

That damn Queen.

And then a voice called her name.

It sent chills up her spine, and goosebumps on her skin - and this voice was oddly familiar.

"Sooyeon honey, let down your hair!"

 

And then it hit her.

It was the Queen.

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She didn't know if she was supposed to follow through the fairytale or not - if she played along, would it do any good? 

She played safe and followed the Queen's orders, hooking her hair over a nail hacked into the stone above the window. She felt a light tug on her scalp but nothing else. 

Weird.

She kept her face straight, facing the Queen in all he

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Vwansha #1
Chapter 25: This story was so cute and funny! I loved it, it always brought a smile to my face and was never draggy. I was really entertained and happy of how sooyeon's and daehyun's relationship developed throughout the story. The ending though, next test subjects. hehe I loved swanyeon though it was really funny and cute. I liked sooyeon's character it's really bright and radiant. Daehyun's character is nice too he's inexperienced and arrogant. I'd wish you would do a sequal to this. It's so cute and it really gives you the feels. Your sense of writing is really good. This story was a success!
Ame-chan #2
Chapter 25: That was so good !!!
It was funny and smart ! Sooyeon is just the type of character that I love so I couldn't be more entertained^^
I hope you will make the Youngjae fic too if you have the time^^
Alfia95 #3
Chapter 25: Authorniiim.....
I lovvveeeee uuuuuuuu.. thank youuu i love the story..
sapphire11 #4
Chapter 25: Omo...i love it authornim....
cece_mytlover
#5
Chapter 25: wow nice ending wo!! felt like a long journey reading this story can't believe it's over :P
imanie93
#6
Chapter 25: Wow!!!you ended it very well!!! So,i very hope you will make youngjae part too..hehe..
purplekpop
#7
Chapter 3: SCREAMS TO INFINITY AND BEYOND
OH MY GOSH
DONGWOOOOOOOOOOO
HOW CAN YOU
hahaha
Daehyun's my ultimate but Dongwoo's my two
AND OH MY GOSH
YES
HaeSha1506
#8
Chapter 24: its ridiculous how good this fic is. glad i subcribed to it though i did have my doubt to this fic back then. but now i can certainly said this is one hella good fantasy fic ^^
Alfia95 #9
Chapter 24: Wow,, it ended too soon.. T_T i will miss the story.. thank you author~nim