Player DooJoon

Who Said It Was Gonna Be Easy?

“Ey DoonDoon!” Uruha smiles big when he spots DooJoon showing up for work.

“Uruha” DooJoon returns the smile with a smaller one. He walks past Uruha over to his locker quickly noticing Uruha moving behind him where he places his chin on DooJoon’s shoulder

“Go out with me” Uruha hugs DooJoon from behind. DooJoon sighs “You really have to ask me that every single day? You already know the answer”

Uruha smirks a little “I didn’t ask you yesterday”

DooJoon lashes a hand behind him hitting Uruha and chuckles “Only because I didn’t pick up when you called”

“You did that on purpose?” Uruha frowns “How rude”

“I was busy” DooJoon smirks and turns his head looking at Uruha “You know”

Uruha nods “Yeah what was her name… Krystal or something”

“No that was last week” DooJoon smirks bigger. Uruha looks at DooJoon’s lips wondering how many girls those have kissed. “You are a dog DooJoon” Uruha pats DooJoon on the stomach and moves back trying to keep up a smile.

DooJoon turns and looks at him “So stop liking me already”

Uruha shrugs “Can’t help it” He grins and then quickly pecks DooJoon’s cheek before running out “You would miss me if I stopped” he yells before exiting the room. DooJoon just shakes his head and laughs. He opens the big locker with his name on it. He puts his bag in it and starts finding his clothes. They don’t really have a dress code here. The only rule is that they can’t wear what they wear in their daily life to work and the other way around.

DooJoon pulls off the t-shirt and replaces it with a white blouse with a v-neck. He turns his head towards the door when Ruki steps in. He is just showing up and looks a bit tired.

“What have you been up to now?” DooJoon smirks

“Don’t ask” Ruki grunts and drops down on a chair. He sends DooJoon a look “How did it go with that girl you talked about last time?”

DooJoon smirks making Ruki laugh “I take that as a good answer”

DooJoon nods and changes into the other pants “Uruha asked me out again”

Ruki leans back “Again? I don’t get why he keeps trying” He scratches his neck and sighs “He should know better”

DooJoon shrugs “He takes my rejections very well” he pulls the zipper in his pants up and looks at Ruki “Is he always that persistent?”

Ruki thinks it over for a while DooJoon checks his reflection correcting a few stray hairs. “Normally he doesn’t have to be” Ruki chuckles

DooJoon laughs and steps back admiring himself in the mirror “Well I can’t blame him for liking me can I?”

“You aren’t actually helping yourself if you want him to stop” Ruki gets up with a sigh starting to change himself. DooJoon looks at him with a grin “I don’t mind. The girls think he is gorgeous and when he flirts with me they want me too so…” he bites his lip and turns his attention back to his reflection.

Ruki glances at DooJoon and raises a brow “Just don’t lead him on” DooJoon smiles and pats Ruki on the back “Don’t worry I know he is your friend and I’m not gonna make him think anything could happen okay”

Ruki nods “I’ll kick your if you do” he smirks at DooJoon who laughs “Don’t worry Ruki I wouldn’t want to get on your bad side” he walks over to the door and opens it

“Better remember that!” Ruki yells after him and DooJoon sends him a grin before walking out. He walks over to the bar and drops down on a chair “Hyorin!” he sends a charming smile at the woman behind the bar.

“Get lost DooJoon I want nothing to do with you” she raises a brow and smirks at him. He sighs and leans his chin on his hand “Now why would you say something like that? I’m such a nice guy”

“Such a player you mean” Hyorin pushes his elbow so he almost hits his head on the counter. He laughs and leans a bit back “I’m just enjoying life. You should try it” he notices her looking to the left where he sees Aoi and Uruha walking while discussing something.

He looks back at her and grins “Does he even look your way?”

Hyorin narrows her eyes at him and pushes him again “Go away!” she pouts and turns so her hair flies over her shoulder. DooJoon watch her walk away and shrugs “That is a no” He turns his head again and looks at Aoi and Uruha.

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is really really... not nervewrecking but well First of all I'm not used to the whole short story thing but I'll give it a go. If anyone gets to this point... Is it too confusing or do you actually get a sense of the characters..

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I changed the name and poster again. . . Well I just didn't think I was gonna want to develop it in the way I'm doing now so I had to!!! This is better anyway

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Mianits
#1
Chapter 32: Oh my! I'm sooo loving this story! Please keep it up ♥
-Angela-Zhang-
#2
Chapter 28: This is very interesting...I remember a part about Uruha having relationship problems, himself, although of a different nature than Doojoon's.
What is it that Doojoon will have to find out?
hehe~ you seem to be deliberately putting Doojoon back into his arrogant, protective character ^^ I like how they are mutually submissive ^^ It suggests the equality that ought to be in a real relationship :)
That's one thing I particularly like about this story- the characters' reactions and the way in which Doojoon and Uruha are progressing with their relationship.
I'm very interested by this "secret detail" that seems to be undisclosed to Doojoon, though. Hopefully it won't have a negative impact on his and Uruha's new relationship...
-Angela-Zhang-
#3
Chapter 27: And I forgot to mention- your writing has improved a lot since the beginning of the story ^^
-Angela-Zhang-
#4
Chapter 27: I certainly have enjoyed this chapter just as much as the last^^
I hadn't ever really thought of it, but now that it seems as though Doojoon is being portrayed as the delicate one in the relationship, or, as a commonplace term, the "submissive", I can say that I find this newfound fragility in Doojoon to be quite tasteful. It's really quite a nice inversion; a stray away from the conventionality of what might be expected from any pairing involving Doojoon and I really like it ^^ Somehow, it certainly seems much more realistic that someone as unsure of himself, as frightened and as estranged from love as Doojoon is, would need someone to take care of him both physically and emotionally. And it just seems appropriate that that someone is Uruha, no matter how pretty or "girly" Uruha's appearance might make him out to be.
It seems like a theme in this story- not judging someone by their appearances or reputation ^^ Like how "player" and "manly" Doojoon certainly has a full range of emotions, as does anyone else, and is by far much more hurt than anyone would ever have perceived. And how Uruha, who seems to be publicly more of a flamboyant type of person, attentive to his implied feminine appearance seems to be the one who can offer Doojoon a sense of safety and protection that he seems not to have ever had before.
Uruha kissing Doojoon's palm is such a tender moment in the story ^^ And, having read and written some mpreg, myself, Uruha wrapping his arms around Doojoon's stomach gave me a faint impression of Doojoon having a baby or something hehe~ ^^' (my mind out of wraps...) but a very loving gesture, indeed ^^
-Angela-Zhang-
#5
Chapter 26: Hehe~ second time reading this chapter today ^^
Doojoon is so cute when he was crying and wanting his Uruha ^^ poor Doojoon... He thought he messed up again...
I'm so happy about this chapter (⌒▽⌒)
-Angela-Zhang-
#6
Chapter 26: Yes, yes YES!!!!!!! :D
This chapter made my day, even though it's just starting ^^
I'm so glad it wasn't Doojoon's fault and that girl is just horrible DX.
Yay!!! Uruha asked Doojoon out again!! :D
They're already so cute together and poor Doojoon when he wanted 'his' Uruha ^^ he seems so fragile in this chapter and I liked that ^^
-Angela-Zhang-
#7
Chapter 25: Oh no...! :(
Doojoon...! What have you done...?!
I have a pretty bad feeling for how things are going to go for Doojoon now... Actually not so much in terms of a relationship, but I think Doojoon himself is going to suffer a lot with what happened...I feel like he's going to give up on himself, not just on a relationship with Uruha but give up on himself as a person...
-Angela-Zhang-
#8
Chapter 24: This is one of my favorite chapters ^^
I really like Doojoon's dad and how he so easily accepted that his son is in love with a man :)
The chapter was so full of warmth and love and this chapter, more than any other, really shows how Doojoon had changed. It's great to see that he really is love with Uruha and that he's reconciled with his father. It certainly seems necessary for him to love his family before entering into a relationship with Uruha.
It was actually quite striking to hear how Doojoon's father married a year ago and Doojoo wasn't even aware of it. It shows just how distant from those close to him he became.
Hopefully Yoonja's daughter won't give Doojoon a hard time... ^^'
It would be very interesting, indeed, to see Uruha meet Doojoon's parents ^^
and hopefully Doojoon will fnd some solace about his relationship with his mother. That rejection when he was only seven must have been terrible.
-Angela-Zhang-
#9
Chapter 23: :'(
What an emotional chapter!! It was great, but poor Doojoon! It seems like this was really the breaking point for him,but I'm actually glad that he got so many negative feelings out in the open. It seemed like a necessary thing to do and now people know exactly how he's feeling. I think it is time that he's given a little more care and support ^^ and I think that the fact that he went to apologize to Donghae shows that he is changing and him pushing Donghae out of the way is proof of the good person that Uruha sees in him :D
I really love the realism in this- how Uruha's not plunging into a relationship, but not giving up on Doojoon, either and how Doojoon's coming to face himself :)
-Angela-Zhang-
#10
Chapter 22: <3
Thank you for thinking of me ^^~ And my exams did go well ^^
That's okay! You take your time in updating- I always love reading this story and I will patiently await your updates :D

I was really glad that Uruha and Doojoon privately spoke with each other in this chapter and that Uruha noticed not only the effort that Doojoon has been applying in trying to change, but also how Doojoon's been struggling with a rather rude confrontation of his faults. I think that having bad feelings go unacknowledge by others is just as bad as dealing with those feelings alone and I was happy that Uruha stood up for Doojoon, despite how much trouble Doojoon's put him through. Doojoon certainly does deserve some notice for his genuine efforts to change.
I like how Uruha is just as protective of Doojoon as Doojoon seems to be over Uruha ^^~ And there was really quite a bit of wisdom in this chapter, about having to trust yourself first, before expecting others to trust you.
I think the seriousness with which Uruha told Doojoon that he liked him and shouldn't let people tell him that he's heartless had quite an impact on Doojoon. It seems to me that this may have been one of the first times, if not the only time, that someone has really seen Doojoon's vulnerability and said to still have feelings for him, regardless. It feels like this sort of reassurance and support is not at all something that Doojoon would have received, prior to speaking with Uruha, on account of his mother not being in his life anymore.
hehe~ in my opinion, there should be even more subscribers for this story! ^^ Although there are not many jrock stories on here and even less "cross-overs", I think that there is a significant audience for this and this is a really awesome story ^^