A Precious Aura

Description

She lived inside him, inside his aura.

She is his aura and a part of his remembrance. 

Being one-sixth of his soul,

She holds the key to his inner thoughts, only the deep and melancholic ones.

 

COLOURS

 

He felt her in him someday. Nothing could be more true than that.

It takes risk to meet her in person, that would mean draining her from within, and him, physically.

Nobody could see her in person, except him.

Only after a period of time, his four brothers became the only one, to see her glow. 

But only her glows. They could only sense her. 

 

What happens when he became too reliant on her?

 

The aura in him stays, but will she?

 

Quizzically untrue. Magical encounter. Deep within him. 

Foreword

 

 

Hi all! 

My second fanfic up :) This would be a totally different concept and definitely shorter than my first fanfic, Dream the impossible.. 
 

So as usual, this fanfic will be based on SS501 ^^ 

I got this idea at 4am in the morning. I couldn't sleep, so as I was tossing and rolling on bed, I got this bizarre idea, by staring at my colourful curtains. LOL. 

Hmm, so hope you will have fun reading and comments/constructive criticisms will be so much appreciated :D Subscribe as you read too! ^o^

 

Those TWO posters >>> super credit to my beloved dongsaeng >>> bigbangluv143 !!!!

 

Anyway, it is purely coincidental if this story look similar to yours, which i hope there isn't this case :) So yup.. I don't try to plagarize because i know how hard it is to write a story! Haha so.. enjoy reading! ^.^

 

 

© extraordinarygill

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saludlang #1
i really love the storrrrry !!
adeloveskyu #2
I hope I could have her in me too, to guide me.. I know God always guide me with my head n my heart, but sometimes I think I need someone who's equivalent with me as my guide, just like precious n YS ^^ U have this wonderful ending, I envy but I feel glad at the same time ;) Sad n touching but I know u can't bear to hurt ur saengie even more, neh ^^ but, one thing that I wish that I could see in this ending : my kyujongie ^^ After all, this story leaves important message for ur readers after they finish reading it *something I rarely find in fanfics ^^* DAEBAK dongsaengie!!!
bigbangluv143
#3
Dear Extraordinarygill unnie... WAE YOU MAKE ME CRY FOR?! TT TT. LOL I'm just kidding but seriously I really did start crying as soon as Saengie started crying because Precious was leaving his side!! Waaaaah~ please come out with the sequel for Dream The Impossible lol I wanna see Saengie happy again because I just feel so sad now that he's happy but sad...What the heck am I talking about?! I don't know because I'm crying, crying, crying, 'cause I can't see you no more~ (precious) lol.. hmm honestly as much as I'm sad right now I'm actually kinda happy that Saengie isn't sad or heartbroken X3
I'm really sad that you finished this story because now I can't leave SUPPPPPPPEEEEERRRRR LONG comments hehehe XDDD. Ooooh wait but you said your going to make the sequel for Dream The Impossible right? OOOOH! I get to leave super long comments and a new poster (yeah I've been working on it for a while). Lol well I'll go and finish that hehehehe beautiful sotry unnie! Hwaiting for your next story!!
areuYS501jimin
#4
as i opened i saw the word completed....but well nice story lol..how did you imagined such like this....should i try? keke... just for a ...
anyway dti lol ill be waiting...really want to see the cheerful gill and their babies...haha 3 babies right?
hugs and kisses for another successful story...clap clap for this....
dandeli0n
#5
THE END~~~
(throws confetti...celebrating...wohooO~~~)
good job, Gill!!! keke.

now, i'm eager for DTI sequel...yeay!!! :DD
adeloveskyu #6
"...I've been isolating myself in the misery of my halmoni's death. And I realize, I'm starting to lose myself if I continue being that way" OMO saengie, so touching TT.TT De, emptiness whenever we felt that one of our best friends almost dissapear from our sight TT.TT be strong saengie ah *I know u can make it.. Ur 4 awesome brothers will be with u n support u when precious gone TT.TT* Yeah well precious is ur aura, then she will always live inside u *don't be so worried neh ;)* "Then suddenly, he felt raindrops falling onto his shirt" me n ma dear author will sing Rainy Heart for u saengie oppa ;) Hwaiting ^.^b
Update again ma dear author n hwaiting for u ^^
dandeli0n
#7
hahaha. YEAH. i remember the 'personal' assistant... :DD

somehow sis, i feel sad.. and okay, i'm teary now. haih~~ how embarrassing. :(
i wonder how my reaction for the last chapter. hahaha.
seriously, the rain moment and when she left.. very melancholy..
THUMBS UP!
update when you have time, okay? :)