Please think before you act!

A Precious Aura

 

 

The next day, Youngsaeng held that bottle with him and went to school. He was curious about the effects of that potion on other people. Obviously, he was totally oblivious to what precious had warned him. " 50 drops is all you have. Treasure it, don't waste it. Remember, my existence do matter."

 

He lied to his friends about the potion being just a type of 'liquid-candy". And so, each of them tried.

 

Nothing happened.

 

Then, his 4 brothers came along. Youngsaeng used the same trick on them again. This time when each of them tried, his thumb started to bleed. One drop after another.

 

He quickly wiped it away and pretended nothing has happened. Although his thumb bled, nothing happened after that, Precious didn't turn up.

 

40 Drops left...

 

The number was reflected clearly on the cap of that tiny bottle. "40", it stated.

 

Next, Youngsaeng quickly kept it and rinsed the drops of blood off his finger.

 

" Mr. Owner! I'm struggling... Please think before you act!" A stern voice came from inside Youngsaeng's mind, only he could hear it.

 

" I am! Precious, stop nagging!" He screamed back into the air.

 

Jungmin, Kyu Jong, Hyunjoong and Hyungjoon instantly turned and stared at him in bewilderment.

 

Just then, Youngsaeng realized the mistake he spoke and quickly came up with an excuse," Er..You..you see, my dream is to become..a.. a composer, so I'm trying to find the correct lyrics to fit the song.. Ha.ha. looks like those can't be part of my lyrics then..."

 

The four just continued glaring at him with those something-must-be-wrong-with-him eyes. Youngsaeng laughed that matter off and walked straight ahead of them.

 

" Phew... That was close..." he lowered his head and murmured under his breath.

 

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39.

 

" This shall be the last time I'm warning you Youngsaeng sii. Do as I said! Don't waste it. This only has an effect on you, no one else. If you're going to abuse this privilege, I won't be there when you need me. Is that understood?" Precious got really annoyed by his nonchalent attitude.

 

Even though she was just his aura, Youngsaeng sees her more than that. Precious was like his guide, guiding him on the right path, like what his grandmother often did, when she was still around.

 

Now, the more Youngsaeng observed Precious, the closer he felt her in him, deep down in his heart. Youngsaeng had accepted Precious into his life, he knew the importance of her, just like how he treasured his grandmother.

 

" Komawo. You revived the memories of how halmoni showered her care and concern for me. Komawo." Youngsaeng thanked Precious sincerely.

 

His grandmother plays an important role in his life, thus, Precious's actions and words gave Youngsaeng the chance to thank his grandma. Those last words Youngsaeng didn't get to say to his grandmother before she passed away, now he could express his heartfelt gratitude towards her, through Precious.

 

And that was the fifth thing in Precious, which convinced Youngsaeng about the whole truth in front of him.

 

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Re-post chapter! :) Sorry, I didn't save the replies so.. yeah. Wait till I got my chapter 10 up and I will reply to all your comments again! :D

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saludlang #1
i really love the storrrrry !!
adeloveskyu #2
I hope I could have her in me too, to guide me.. I know God always guide me with my head n my heart, but sometimes I think I need someone who's equivalent with me as my guide, just like precious n YS ^^ U have this wonderful ending, I envy but I feel glad at the same time ;) Sad n touching but I know u can't bear to hurt ur saengie even more, neh ^^ but, one thing that I wish that I could see in this ending : my kyujongie ^^ After all, this story leaves important message for ur readers after they finish reading it *something I rarely find in fanfics ^^* DAEBAK dongsaengie!!!
bigbangluv143
#3
Dear Extraordinarygill unnie... WAE YOU MAKE ME CRY FOR?! TT TT. LOL I'm just kidding but seriously I really did start crying as soon as Saengie started crying because Precious was leaving his side!! Waaaaah~ please come out with the sequel for Dream The Impossible lol I wanna see Saengie happy again because I just feel so sad now that he's happy but sad...What the heck am I talking about?! I don't know because I'm crying, crying, crying, 'cause I can't see you no more~ (precious) lol.. hmm honestly as much as I'm sad right now I'm actually kinda happy that Saengie isn't sad or heartbroken X3
I'm really sad that you finished this story because now I can't leave SUPPPPPPPEEEEERRRRR LONG comments hehehe XDDD. Ooooh wait but you said your going to make the sequel for Dream The Impossible right? OOOOH! I get to leave super long comments and a new poster (yeah I've been working on it for a while). Lol well I'll go and finish that hehehehe beautiful sotry unnie! Hwaiting for your next story!!
areuYS501jimin
#4
as i opened i saw the word completed....but well nice story lol..how did you imagined such like this....should i try? keke... just for a ...
anyway dti lol ill be waiting...really want to see the cheerful gill and their babies...haha 3 babies right?
hugs and kisses for another successful story...clap clap for this....
dandeli0n
#5
THE END~~~
(throws confetti...celebrating...wohooO~~~)
good job, Gill!!! keke.

now, i'm eager for DTI sequel...yeay!!! :DD
adeloveskyu #6
"...I've been isolating myself in the misery of my halmoni's death. And I realize, I'm starting to lose myself if I continue being that way" OMO saengie, so touching TT.TT De, emptiness whenever we felt that one of our best friends almost dissapear from our sight TT.TT be strong saengie ah *I know u can make it.. Ur 4 awesome brothers will be with u n support u when precious gone TT.TT* Yeah well precious is ur aura, then she will always live inside u *don't be so worried neh ;)* "Then suddenly, he felt raindrops falling onto his shirt" me n ma dear author will sing Rainy Heart for u saengie oppa ;) Hwaiting ^.^b
Update again ma dear author n hwaiting for u ^^
dandeli0n
#7
hahaha. YEAH. i remember the 'personal' assistant... :DD

somehow sis, i feel sad.. and okay, i'm teary now. haih~~ how embarrassing. :(
i wonder how my reaction for the last chapter. hahaha.
seriously, the rain moment and when she left.. very melancholy..
THUMBS UP!
update when you have time, okay? :)