She appeared

A Precious Aura

 

 

KyuJong secretly observed Youngsaeng. Jungmin secretly distracted Youngsaeng. Hyungjoon secretly eyed Youngsaeng's reactions and Hyunjoong secretly followed through Youngsaeng's actions. The four were suspecting something was wrong with him, they were worried sick.

 

Action number 1- Scooping up air and placing it into his mouth, thinking he got a whole mouthful of rice there.

Action number 2- Singing during lessons.

Action number 3- Staring into space, laughing to himself every now and then, then have a total switch of emotions after that. Split personality suspected.

Action number 4- Saw a pillar in front of him but still being able to crash into it ACCIDENTALLY.

 

Everything was getting more bizarre. It was too sudden, Youngsaeng's unusual behavior, too sudden. The four had no idea how to question him. Something told them this still wasn't the appropriate time to ask. They kept it inside them and continue protecting Youngsaeng, whenever his craziness, what they regarded as, acts up again.

 

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It acts up at night. That excruciating stinging pain. Whenever he felt that, he would lock himself at the corner of the balcony- Youngsaeng's only place of comfort.

 

At that instance, he heard that. Definitely heard something out of the blue. He was certain to be alone at the balcony, at his usual spot, when the gentle voice broke the silence of the torturous night. He shut his eyes as tightly as possible and held on to his heavy head, like as though he was going to pull out every strand of hair all at one go.

 

" Halmoni... This is it. I must have missed her too much.."

 

Suddenly, something glowed from behind him. His pain completely wiped out at that instance. His mind was cleared again. His senses regained. 

 

Youngsaeng turned. She looked completely perfect, flawless smooth skin, an epitome of pure beauty. She stood before him, shining brighter than the ordinaries.

 

" Who are you?"

 

" I am your aura, the aura in you. You may consider me as a part of your remembrance. I hold the key to your inner thoughts. Your auras swirled, I was sent to protect you, from inside."

 

Youngsaeng froze. His eyes were playing tricks on him, he thought. He blinked several times, that glow remained, that aura stood. He tried to speak, no words could come out.

 

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She was only visible in the dark, pitch dark. Except when it rains, since the moon will be hidden behind the clouds. The moon was Youngsaeng's guide, since she guides him in a certain way, once the moon cannot be seen, she vanishes.

 

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Youngsaeng laid himself on bed, couldn't get himself to believe his own eyes. The extreme emotions changes causes him to once again, get completely shut off. Shut off from his thoughts, shut off from the whole unbelievable truth.

 

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Hmm this will be a kinda complicated story, so read every single line properly to catch the hints to every chapter :) Every chapter will link one way or another, Hope the story is progressing well :)

 

@ adeloveskyu

Haha really? Now that you mentioned, it really seemed like it haha. It's what you imagined? That's good.. haha Thankyu! ^^

@ amyra961

Thankyu!! :D

@ lonelygurl501

I can't reveal first. So you know it soon dongsaengie :D 

@ Areu501

Read on :) I will reveal it soon. This story will go straight to the point, isn't going to drag anymore ^^

@ dandeli0n

Haha thanks! Woah it did? >.< Lol. Is that a good thing or a bad thing? Haha. ^^

@ bigbangluv143

Awww yes he needs it. Hurry give him a hug now! LOL. Thanks! <3

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saludlang #1
i really love the storrrrry !!
adeloveskyu #2
I hope I could have her in me too, to guide me.. I know God always guide me with my head n my heart, but sometimes I think I need someone who's equivalent with me as my guide, just like precious n YS ^^ U have this wonderful ending, I envy but I feel glad at the same time ;) Sad n touching but I know u can't bear to hurt ur saengie even more, neh ^^ but, one thing that I wish that I could see in this ending : my kyujongie ^^ After all, this story leaves important message for ur readers after they finish reading it *something I rarely find in fanfics ^^* DAEBAK dongsaengie!!!
bigbangluv143
#3
Dear Extraordinarygill unnie... WAE YOU MAKE ME CRY FOR?! TT TT. LOL I'm just kidding but seriously I really did start crying as soon as Saengie started crying because Precious was leaving his side!! Waaaaah~ please come out with the sequel for Dream The Impossible lol I wanna see Saengie happy again because I just feel so sad now that he's happy but sad...What the heck am I talking about?! I don't know because I'm crying, crying, crying, 'cause I can't see you no more~ (precious) lol.. hmm honestly as much as I'm sad right now I'm actually kinda happy that Saengie isn't sad or heartbroken X3
I'm really sad that you finished this story because now I can't leave SUPPPPPPPEEEEERRRRR LONG comments hehehe XDDD. Ooooh wait but you said your going to make the sequel for Dream The Impossible right? OOOOH! I get to leave super long comments and a new poster (yeah I've been working on it for a while). Lol well I'll go and finish that hehehehe beautiful sotry unnie! Hwaiting for your next story!!
areuYS501jimin
#4
as i opened i saw the word completed....but well nice story lol..how did you imagined such like this....should i try? keke... just for a ...
anyway dti lol ill be waiting...really want to see the cheerful gill and their babies...haha 3 babies right?
hugs and kisses for another successful story...clap clap for this....
dandeli0n
#5
THE END~~~
(throws confetti...celebrating...wohooO~~~)
good job, Gill!!! keke.

now, i'm eager for DTI sequel...yeay!!! :DD
adeloveskyu #6
"...I've been isolating myself in the misery of my halmoni's death. And I realize, I'm starting to lose myself if I continue being that way" OMO saengie, so touching TT.TT De, emptiness whenever we felt that one of our best friends almost dissapear from our sight TT.TT be strong saengie ah *I know u can make it.. Ur 4 awesome brothers will be with u n support u when precious gone TT.TT* Yeah well precious is ur aura, then she will always live inside u *don't be so worried neh ;)* "Then suddenly, he felt raindrops falling onto his shirt" me n ma dear author will sing Rainy Heart for u saengie oppa ;) Hwaiting ^.^b
Update again ma dear author n hwaiting for u ^^
dandeli0n
#7
hahaha. YEAH. i remember the 'personal' assistant... :DD

somehow sis, i feel sad.. and okay, i'm teary now. haih~~ how embarrassing. :(
i wonder how my reaction for the last chapter. hahaha.
seriously, the rain moment and when she left.. very melancholy..
THUMBS UP!
update when you have time, okay? :)