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A Precious Aura

 

 

That stinging pain struck again. Now, each time he felt this, his instincts would convey a message for him to check the number on that cap of the bottle.

 

True enough, as much as Youngsaeng dread to see it, 12.

 

12 more drops, that implied Youngsaeng's last few days with Precious. It no longer decreased in a chronological order.

 

Since that was the last few times he could see Precious, Youngsaeng decided to use that potion even when not in need. It was more worth it than waiting for it to decrease unknowingly even if he didn't make her appear.

 

11.

 

" When are you leaving?" Youngsaeng sternly asked.

 

Precious kept quiet. She refused to answer that question. It was obvious to Youngsaeng when she will be gone, so Precious didn't find the need to reply him.

 

" Are you not going to answer me?"

 

" I'm leaving a few minutes later..."

 

" I mean... Not for now. I mean, once and for all."

 

" You wouldn't even realize it, trust me," Precious shook his head and mumbled.

 

That sentence Precious said meant something for sure.

 

" Are you really going to keep me in the dark? Until you're really gone? I wouldn't know the answer?"

 

" I already said, you wouldn't even realize it. You will know why," Precious scoffed.

 

" How?!" This time, Youngsaeng got agitated.

 

" If you're going to get irritated by me, I will leave now," Precious threatened.

 

" Fine! Leave!! Since everything I ask, you wouldn't even bother to answer!" Youngsaeng roared.

 

" You said it, don't regret."

 

So, she disappeared.

 

Youngsaeng shut his eyes hard and inhaled deeply.

 

* You know I didn't mean it...

 

" Come out! I don't want to use another drop!" Youngsaeng hollered into the air.

 

Silence.

 

10.

 

" Now what?? Are you really intending to bet your own fate away?!" Precious furiously questioned.

 

Actually, the way Youngsaeng feels somehow depicts the mood of Precious too. 

 

" Can't you sense my real intentions? I didn't even mean what I said just now!" Youngsaeng added.

 

Incinerating orange. The feeling of angst and frustration hovered around them.

 

When her days are numbered, the quarrel between them tends to intensify as well.

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 I got a little more free time this week so got another chapter crafted out :)) Enjoy and Comment! ^^

 

@ bigbangluv143

Yups! ^^ Haha my upcoming chapters will keep reminding ou on that.. I guess? LOL. Yipee~ *Happy happy* Hahaha. Anyway, yup they are getting closer, hmm but when Precious leaves (I'm not sure yet), that will mark the end of my story. No more new characters will be introduced. (: Yeah somehow, I'm worried for my own character too =.= lol. Okays! I will be anticipating that update! ^.^

@ Areu501

Hahaha yeah, *loving himself* Aigoo.. gosh. Hahaha but can't help it keke XD Thankyu! <3

@ aYi_foRevEr501

Keke you mean changing the way she acts in front of Saengie now? Yups! She is more of the friendly kind now :)) That is for a reason keke. Everything I wrote in this story has a reason behind it lol. So yeps! ~ Hahaha Precious falling for Saengie?? Hmm.. You think so? kekeke. Oh that will be great! But unfortunately, that bottle is not refillable.. lol. ^^

@ dandeli0n

Hahaha yeah, he has been sorta hinting Precious. But its kinda weird for him to be 'loving himself' right? Hahaha!! I think it's weird.. why did I even write that? O.o LOL. Awww you're welcome! <3

@ adeloveskyu

Glad you like it :) I know you like blue keke. Yup, they are like friends now, more comfortable with each other. ^^ Actually I enjoy writing those parts where they teased each other too lol. Yups, Jungmin has made a 'reputation' for himself. haha the 'self-lover' XD Anyway, I will probably update on every weekend, if time permits :) I miss your story too! Please update yours real soon!! :DD

 

 

 

 

Gahhh I'm so happy now because Youngsaeng's 2nd mini album is coming out on the 22th May!! <3

 

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saludlang #1
i really love the storrrrry !!
adeloveskyu #2
I hope I could have her in me too, to guide me.. I know God always guide me with my head n my heart, but sometimes I think I need someone who's equivalent with me as my guide, just like precious n YS ^^ U have this wonderful ending, I envy but I feel glad at the same time ;) Sad n touching but I know u can't bear to hurt ur saengie even more, neh ^^ but, one thing that I wish that I could see in this ending : my kyujongie ^^ After all, this story leaves important message for ur readers after they finish reading it *something I rarely find in fanfics ^^* DAEBAK dongsaengie!!!
bigbangluv143
#3
Dear Extraordinarygill unnie... WAE YOU MAKE ME CRY FOR?! TT TT. LOL I'm just kidding but seriously I really did start crying as soon as Saengie started crying because Precious was leaving his side!! Waaaaah~ please come out with the sequel for Dream The Impossible lol I wanna see Saengie happy again because I just feel so sad now that he's happy but sad...What the heck am I talking about?! I don't know because I'm crying, crying, crying, 'cause I can't see you no more~ (precious) lol.. hmm honestly as much as I'm sad right now I'm actually kinda happy that Saengie isn't sad or heartbroken X3
I'm really sad that you finished this story because now I can't leave SUPPPPPPPEEEEERRRRR LONG comments hehehe XDDD. Ooooh wait but you said your going to make the sequel for Dream The Impossible right? OOOOH! I get to leave super long comments and a new poster (yeah I've been working on it for a while). Lol well I'll go and finish that hehehehe beautiful sotry unnie! Hwaiting for your next story!!
areuYS501jimin
#4
as i opened i saw the word completed....but well nice story lol..how did you imagined such like this....should i try? keke... just for a ...
anyway dti lol ill be waiting...really want to see the cheerful gill and their babies...haha 3 babies right?
hugs and kisses for another successful story...clap clap for this....
dandeli0n
#5
THE END~~~
(throws confetti...celebrating...wohooO~~~)
good job, Gill!!! keke.

now, i'm eager for DTI sequel...yeay!!! :DD
adeloveskyu #6
"...I've been isolating myself in the misery of my halmoni's death. And I realize, I'm starting to lose myself if I continue being that way" OMO saengie, so touching TT.TT De, emptiness whenever we felt that one of our best friends almost dissapear from our sight TT.TT be strong saengie ah *I know u can make it.. Ur 4 awesome brothers will be with u n support u when precious gone TT.TT* Yeah well precious is ur aura, then she will always live inside u *don't be so worried neh ;)* "Then suddenly, he felt raindrops falling onto his shirt" me n ma dear author will sing Rainy Heart for u saengie oppa ;) Hwaiting ^.^b
Update again ma dear author n hwaiting for u ^^
dandeli0n
#7
hahaha. YEAH. i remember the 'personal' assistant... :DD

somehow sis, i feel sad.. and okay, i'm teary now. haih~~ how embarrassing. :(
i wonder how my reaction for the last chapter. hahaha.
seriously, the rain moment and when she left.. very melancholy..
THUMBS UP!
update when you have time, okay? :)