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Jongdae shuts his eyes close, brows furrowed as his fingertips softly trails down the jaw, a silent breath escapes from his parted lips. He rests his back leaning to the chair the first thing as he arrived just now, then again after a few minutes of reviewing the topic he is supposed to teach in another 30 minutes. Only a few pages flipped yet his mind gives up once more, again flying him back to what just happened earlier on the roadside, a few seconds after that incident happened.

“Despite all that, perhaps you’re quite kind too.”

The lady’s face turns red, earning the guy’s smirk as he thought he won in teasing her however it eventually loosens up when the former notices a pair of Ga Eul’s shaky pupils and pursed lips trembling while her eyes are b with… tears. Her hand then feels cold as their skin touches each other, hastily made the guy asks in worry, “Miss Ga Eul? Are you okay?”

Her hand drops soon as Jongdae’s grip to her wrist slackens, she could feel her heart is currently quivering due to the situation a while ago, she has never thought that the incident from almost 10 years ago is still affecting her. Especially when she did not witnessed it happened to her dad thus the lady imagined that it would be easy to shoo everything off her mind. Things doesn’t work that way, though.

Slowly, the tears dam breaks, making the hot fluid falls down her cheeks, earning more concern from the other however when the young man tries to pull her close towards him for a pat on her back, Ga Eul is faster to make her way out from the situation.

“I’m okay,” she breathes almost inaudibly. Even her own self does not expect it coming.

In a flash, her stomping feet to the ground has led her to stride away, leaving the guy in confusion and curiosity.

For a whole minute, Jongdae stayed at that same spot, wondering whatever reasons that could bring the lady’s unexpected emotional reaction. Was his joke is too excessive or is it due to other external factor? – all those kinds of question gush through his mind on that one moment. And he is surely still thinking about that; it bothers him to see a person like that – whom he saw as a bold and persistent lady breaks, showing her fragile side.

She looks like she was scared of something.

“Is it men that she is scared of? That’s why she pushes me away each time?”

Jongdae is a person who couldn’t stay in the dark, he hates not having the idea of something he is dead-eager to know. He murmurs to question himself, knowing that he would not get an answer this way, which of course, has made him never expecting a reply from another voice right by his ears, “Maybe if you ask her then you would find out?”

“Byun Baekhyun!” he yells in surprise, hands on his chest to calm his heart down from the shock of his friend’s appearing out of nowhere, like a ghost.

Meanwhile the latter grins teasingly, eyes narrowing at him then coos, “Isn’t it fun to have someone to think of like this?”

“What do you mean?” Jongdae backs off, sending a death glare to the other. He wonders why that one friend of his is always acting this way, showing himself at this kind of moments, no different than the sidekick character in weekend dramas that he watches. Doesn’t he has a job to do?

Baekhyun’s teasing gaze and smile are still intact on his face, he walks from where he appears to the other side of desk with hands in the back like a training instructor, “I just came from the briefing for the new hires.” He turns then steals a glance to Jongdae, “Your new girlfriend seems pretty cute too.”

“New– what?”

“The one you,” Baekhyun motion a quick gesture of arms slamming to the wall then continues, cheekily, “…do this to earlier. Do you think I didn’t see it?”

The former’s jaw drops before he panics to the point that he springs off from his seat, “What? Did the others saw it? It’s just you, right?”

“Relax, just me…probably,” Baekhyun chuckles. “Since it was my bike that almost ran over you two.”

“What the ? Baekhyun!” Jongdae frowns, “You scared a person off!”

“I know! Not that I did it on purpose at the first place…!” The man who is clearly at fault shrugs, briefly raising a pout from his pink lips, “I was about to apologize but when I turn around, I already saw you two…like that. And I don’t want to ruin your moment.” The younger rolls his eyes, his headache worsen that now he knows who is the ‘culprit’. Again, a glare is shoot straight onto Baekhyun’s face that makes the other flinches, “I’m sorry, okay? I’m sorry. I didn’t mean it.”

“It’s okay then.” Jongdae is quick to forgive, then

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!