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28.

 

Ga Eul shoots an unamused gaze towards her brother, huffing at the behaviour of him for the boy keeps on cackling over one sentence she stated just now. Especially when the latter raises one arm up in the air, asking the other person between them for a high-five.

And as if it is a reflex, Jongdae responses to the gesture with ease. He couldn’t help but to join Haneul laughing as he sees the latter’s grin, however it doesn’t last long before his soft chuckles turns into winces as a slight pressure is suddenly applied on his scraped knuckles. Knowing that the act is done on purpose, his head snaps to the front, hissing, just to receive a squint from the lady as she speaks whilst teeth gritted, “Is it that fun for you guys?”

“Of course!” Haneul chirps, “Hyung clearly did a right thing. That’s what that ridiculous head deserves!”

Without sparing a look towards the boy, Ga Eul raises up her free arm, pointing at him, “Ma, Haneul speaks foul language.”

“I’d allow him do that for today.”

The mother’s cool response has led to another burst of laughter from Jongdae, yet again, the mirth is replaced by a yelp for Ga Eul did the same thing as before – pressing the same spot on purpose. The guy slips his hand out from the latter’s grip right away, whining, “Ah, noona! Stop that, will you?”

“Then who told you to get yourself into trouble like that?” She leans in, taking another cotton swab to be dipped in the ointment before gesturing the other to come closer again. And Jongdae doesn’t protest, this time leaning his face in for the lady to proceed what they have been doing for the past few minutes. Ga Eul clucks her tongue at the sight in front of her, sighing underneath her breath as she carefully applies the cream on the tiny cut on Jongdae’s lower lips. “Fistfight? What are you? Kids?”

The guy tears his gaze away from the other, only pouting as an answer to that question. He knows it too well that the lady is upset, he’d feel the same way if he were in her shoes, somehow it feels unfair that he gets the nagging over this.

Meanwhile Ga Eul is loyal with her antiques – of acting the exact opposite than the actual feelings that is buried inside. Her heart sinks over seeing Jongdae’s beautiful face is now covered with wounds and bruises here and there. Guilt wraps her heart tight, it’s almost suffocating to think that the fight wouldn’t happen if she steps in earlier.

And it never crosses her mind that Jongdae would do that for her.

She feels bad yet strangely it feels good too.

Neither of those two gets a wink of sleep yet since they only got home around 5 in the morning after sorting things out. And right after Jongdae finished taking a shower earlier, Haneul came into his house – telling the former to come over to their house, as that is what has been ordered by the mother herself.

“Quit blaming him, will you?” Madam Lee voices out as she comes towards the two person, handing over the peeled boiled egg to her daughter before the latter passes it to the young man for him to roll it over his bruised cheek. “Teacher Kim did it by impulse, it’s not like he purposely came over there to fight.”

“I know that, Ma.” Ga Eul places down the swab as she’s done putting it on all the cuts and scrapes, then leans to the other side of the couch to grab the blanket that Haneul brought out from his room just now. She glances to her mom while casually wrapping the cover around Jongdae’s shoulders, “But this kid didn’t do it once, they almost fought again at the station.”

“Oh, really? Teacher Kim, I don’t know you have that side in you.”

The mother giggles over it, meanwhile Haneul who’s supposedly be gulping down his essential dairy intake has slammed his plastic glass on the dining table in abrupt, shocking the others who are gathering at the sofa in the living room. “Ah, wait. I’ve been meaning to ask you that,” he exclaims before scurrying towards everyone, crashing himself to the seat beside his mother. The boy leans his body forward, gazes over Jongdae, curiosity filled his pair of eyes. “How did you guys end up there at the station? It can’t be they caught you or something.”

“Well,” the young man turns at the lady beside him for a nod of approval, then faces to the front again after gaining one. “Your noona was the one who told me to send him there.”

“And he didn’t refuse?”

“Actually–” Jongdae hums for a bit, a finger flies behind his ear, scratching it whilst another hand is still busy massaging the egg on his cheek, “–I’d say he wasn’t really in a state that enables him to do anything. Shixun was knocked out when we call the police over.”

Ga Eul shrugs as she receives a look of disbelief from her family then scooches over towards the guy once again, fixing the blanket that had almost slipped out from its position. Noticing that the cover keeps on sliding down due to Jongdae’s continuous movement, she holds out her hand quietly asking for the boiled egg – casually taking over the job.

“That prick was dead drunk at the moment we were about to walk home,” she continues telling the story in the guy’s place – not knowing the latter is battling against his heart as he is aware that they are now very close to each other to the point that he could feel her body heat. “And I don’t think he came over with a car or something. We checked his pockets, not even his wallet was there with him. So I thought it was better for him to spend the night there rather on the street.”

“Luckily Officer Doh and Officer Kim were on night duty. So I called them over to help us.”

Jongdae explains, before Madam Lee cuts in, “Ah, it’s been a while since I saw those two. I wonder how they’re doing…”

“They’re always there at the station, Ma. You could visit them later,” Haneul pats his mom’s thigh lazily, turning to the two person again in anticipation for more story. “Then, then?”

“There’s nothing specific happened after that.” Ga Eul pauses for a bit, recalling the event for a second, “Nothing except them causing a scene at the station.”

“Almost!”

“Yeah, right. Almost,” she replies half-heartedly at the guy’s strong disclaimer, “Thank God the officers stopped them before anything could happen.” Ga Eul snaps her head to the guy’s direction again, “I never knew you are that close with those two.”

“They’re the first friends I made here. And sometimes I help Auntie handing over packed meals for them.”

The lady huffs upon that statement, deadpanned by her own mother, “Ma, you really feed this whole neighbourhood, don’t you?”

“Those kids are working hard day and night, there aren’t many young officers like them in this neig

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!