thirty-five

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35.

 

“Then, how was–” the lady pauses, fingers massaging her forehead, earning her husband’s attention to the phone call she is having at the moment. “Alright, Auntie. I’ll check on her later.” She sighs right away as the call ended, placing her cell on the table before turning to the man whose eyes are imploring for an explanation.

Jisoo curls a faint smile, arms reaching for her man’s before she lands her bum right next to the latter.

“It’s Eul, she’s–” her lips pursed, fingers threading through her locks in slight frustration, “–well, something happened in the past and now everything…” She turns to Jinyoung, pouting, “I don’t really have an idea about what’s going on right now, it has become a whole mess.”

Yet Jinyoung stays calm, caressing his lady’s back and hair in hopes that he provides comfort, “Do you want me to tag along?”

“No, it’s okay.” She leans to his broad shoulder, nuzzling her face on that chest, “Eul. I’m really worried about her. She took a very long time recovering from that incident and now it…Jongdae too…”

“You’re really having a hard time explaining this, aren’t you?”

A brittle chuckles escapes from Jisoo’s lips before it eventually turns to a puppy whine and the waterworks unleashed, “I feel really bad for her.” The lady tightens her arms around her husband’s waist, a part of shirt that Jinyoung wears at the moment is now wet with her tears as her words muffled against her man’s torso, “Why it’s always her to have it worse?”

“Don’t say it like that.” More than anyone else, Jinyoung knows how much the lady cares about that one friend of hers as she’d seen Ga Eul gone through ups and downs right in front of her eyes. Imagining the heartbreak that their friend is facing right now must have been pretty devastating for Jisoo too, thus his fingers continue to run through his wife’s locks, planting soft pecks on top of her head in between as he whispers in reassurance, “She’ll be alright. They’ll fix this, and we’ll help her.”

The lady nods a few times as she sniffles before continuing to shed tears in silence for a few more long minutes in Jinyoung’s arms – right until the buzzer of their apartment rings, indicating someone’s presence at the front door. She pulls away almost immediately, sparing a glance towards the door before pivoting to her husband again, who wears quite the same confusion in his face. It takes a few seconds before the buzzer rings once more, this time with a voice greets through the intercom.

“Sorry for coming over unannounced. It’s me.”

 

 

Cusses escapes from his mouth as he had almost get tripped over empty beer cans as soon as he enters that wide space, making a few of them scattered away from its plastic bag. His gaze then lifts sharp, darting towards the person who is currently sleeping on the hammock with a winter jacket covering the upper body right up to the face.

“For real?” He narrows his eyes to that static figure of his friend’s, yanking the jacket off the latter’s head and tossing it away. “Do you really have to do it this way? Are you kidding me?”

Baekhyun rolls his eyes, huffing in slight frustration meanwhile the other grunts, ruffling his hair as he sits up straight, looking around half-asleep.

“Don’t even bother…”

“How could I not bother, you little…” The older crosses his arms, still darting a sharp gaze towards Jongdae. “Darn it, Kim Jongdae. Come back to your sense, will you?” He looks around the art studio, sighing, “If you’re going to continue acting this way, at least show it in front of her. Be it protest or something. Not like this…” Baekhyun ambles towards the small refrigerator at the corner of the room, dipping his head to look for a cold drink for himself before finding a mineral water, “….alone. Pathetically.”

Jongdae could only return the sigh before getting off from the hammock and strides towards the door where the cans that his friend kicked just now has rolled to.

“At least I clean up. Except that you made it into a mess–” he pauses just to turn his head and squint at the other, “–by not watching your steps.” Upon that statement, Baekhyun grins sheepishly, making him shakes his head lazily before continuing to face his back at his friend, inserting the cans into that plastic bag all over again. “So you came here just to tell me I look pathetic?”

“Pretty much. More like baring the news that you’re not the only one looking like this.”

Jongdae’s hand halts its movement, tearing his gaze away from the floor yet doesn’t spare a glance towards the older. The former remains investing silence before continuing to pick up the scattered cans, completely ignoring the words from his friend.

“Egoistic bastard,” Baekhyun cusses inaudibly before slamming the bottle to the working desk, pulling the swivel chair from its place for him to sit on.

“The whole time you’re here avoiding everyone, Miss Ga Eul teaches four classes per day, substituting Ms Goh and Mr. Lee for their days off, rolling up that parents-teacher post-exam consultation session the whole day yesterday, submitted the consultation report this morning which she probably worked on the whole night and hell, apparently she’s helping our new accountant too with the financial report before the new session starts this winter break. I heard it from Mrs Ahn herself. Ga Eul comes to the office really early in the morning and get off work at 9 or 10, like an energetic superwoman. More like a madman. At first they were worried too, but she’s acting just fine so everyone ended up thinking everything is okay.”

His hand flies to the forehead, gently massaging the side of it. “And Kim Jongdae, you know better what it means when she acts that way. Not to mention that only five days have passed, no one would know how worse it’d turn out if this goes on for the rest of this month.”

Baekhyun then reaches for the bottle again, chugging the water down his throat whilst his other hand rests on his chest as he murmurs, “God, I’m losing my breath here, trying to catch up with her.”

“So you saw that,” Jongdae finally speaks up as he gets up and ambles to the trash bin, heaves a sigh whilst throwing the rubbish away, “And you do nothing?”

“Excuse me?”

The man turns to face his friend, arms crossed with a sharp, displeased gaze, “You’re the boss, Baekhyun. You could’ve stopped that.”

“Right. Why didn’t I think of that?” Baekhyun squints to the space, humming for a few seconds as if he is really working on that idea. “Oh. Probably because she avoids me at all costs! Don’t dare to say I didn’t try enough, you know how persistent she is.” He scoffs, unamused as the memory of it flashes in his mind. “Wow, I hate that I’m not even kidding now,” he gets up and wags a finger towards the other as he walks past the latter. “So don’t nag me for texting you often because I’m super bored since I have nobody else to tease on daily basis. Or maybe you could consider coming back to the academy.”

“You know I’m tied up with the company for this time being.”

“Start taking calls from your secretary then. Seriously, it gets annoying when Secretary Song wouldn’t stop

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!