twenty-seven

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27.

 

“Good choice.” A beam curls along that set of lips, eyes twinkling as he gazes at the other. “That kid surely needs a little push.”

She sips the third can of beer from the five that she bought just now, before lifting her chin up, gazing at the dark sky. The breeze is exceptionally cold today, perhaps giving the early notice that it might be raining tonight. Still, she stays there, enjoying the silence of the night alone, accompanied with dim light from the lamp posts around the playground.

There are barely any thoughts coming across her mind at the moment, the night feels peaceful in some way. Or maybe her heart is.

At least after sorting out her thoughts and came into a decision which led to the voicemail she left for Jongdae, Ga Eul finds herself loosen up a bit.

Now the lady knows the path that she should and want to take, all she has left to do now is to wait for tomorrow morning to come. Of course, there is possibility that it might turn out opposite than what she wished it to be, but Ga Eul couldn’t care any less of the future outcomes. When her mind is set to do something, she’ll strive for it no matter what, no matter how.

Just when Ga Eul leaning down to get another can after emptying the one she has in her hand, drips from the sky starts hitting the earth, leaving marks on the ground. She snaps her head up, squeezes her eyes shut – grin appears on her face, relishing every bead of the rain that touches her skin.

The lady stays in that manner for a whole two minute, contemplating whether to leave or to play a bit more with the drizzle. Only after the downpour gradually turns heavier that Ga Eul gets up from the swing, finally taking her leave as she thinks that she would have more time with the rainfall along her way home. With that purpose, she saunters along the lonely street. Her palms cup the raindrops before sprinkling them in between, showing the carefree side of hers for once.

Yet the universe seems to forbid her doing so for Ga Eul bumps herself onto someone as she is playfully walking backwards whilst having her eyes closed.

The lady yelps in surprise as she jumps away from the person, her feet pivot to face the other, squeezing her eyes shut and bows apologetically while says sorry a couple of times, right until the latter voices out.

“Eul, it’s me.”

Hearing the awfully-familiar voice, Ga Eul snaps her head up, just for her to have a sight of the man taking off his cap, revealing the face that was previously hidden by the shadow. She is clearly gaping, her pair of orbs widen whilst her feet takes one step back.

The guy remains steady despite the reaction, his eyes bores into hers. Now that the lady is standing in front of him, he knows that he made the right decision coming here. Even Ga Eul clearly shows that his presence is unwelcomed, he could not care less on that. Because at least, he gets to see the person he longed for.

“Shixun,” she breathes.

Her mind is still processing on what is happening at the moment. Her ex-boyfriend appeared out of nowhere, drenched by the rain. Not to mention, he looks way too different from how he always was. Shixun let his facial hair grows which is unlike him that she knew, and his face seems smaller than usual. Ga Eul feels like she is looking at a different person. He looks weary, like someone who’s lost. However still, it doesn’t change the fact that the guy’s presence is not something to be pleased about.

“What are you doing here? Why are you here, how do you know this place?”

Shixun’s pair of eyes hesitantly glance from behind his lashes, finger scratches the area above his brow, sheepishly smiling. “You must’ve hated me that much, didn’t you?”

“Quit talking rubbish, will you? Answer me, Xun. Why are you here?”

Shixun draws his step closer instead of answering, his arm moves quick, extending to the front to grab Ga Eul’s wrist before yanking the small figure towards himself. In a swift, he embrace the lady tightly meanwhile the latter fails to do anything but freezes, her body is tense as if the guy is hugging a sculpture made of concrete.

“Y-you…what are you d-doing?” Her words came out as stutter, still in the utter confusion. She is suffocated by being in Shixun’s hold, not sure whether due to the tight and firm hug or the act is unreservedly sickening. She squirms and wiggles endlessly, trying to push him away but none of her efforts brings a result to her liking.

“Can’t we just stay like this? Even just for a minute, please.”

An abrupt surge of energy gush through Ga Eul’s vein upon hearing that request, finally succeeding in getting the guy off from her as she glares at the latter in disgust.

“What? You are not making any sense now, you know that, right?” she sneers, “Do you think I’m glad to see you again?”

“I know, Eul. I do, but…”

“If you do, then why are you here?! Why are you doing this?” Her fingers run through her dripping wet locks to the back out of frustration, her gaze remains in the same manner. “Leave,” she demands, one finger points straight to the guy’s face. “Don’t show your face to me ever ag–”

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!