thirty-three

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33.

 

The sound from the wind chimes hanged by the door fills the entire space of the shop, turning one’s head towards the direction with curiosity of whom comes visiting despite the sign on the door obviously read as ‘closed’. Yet the corner of the lady’s lips curl upon seeing the person standing by the door, as well as the wrinkle by her eyes that becomes visible every time she smiles. She sets the scissor and ribbon down on the table, rising up from the chair as she welcomes the young man in.

“Teacher Kim, what brings you here?” Her head then turns towards the wall for a quick glance at the calendar. “And I don’t think it’s time of the month yet.”

“No, Auntie. It’s okay,” the guy refuses – almost panicked – as he catches Madam Lee’s intention to get him some drink from the small fridge behind the counter. “And I’m not here for the flowers.” He pauses, checking the latter’s reaction that shows a bit of interest to what he is going to say next. Though he already practised several times before – only in his mind, Jongdae couldn’t help but to feel nervous. “I have a few things to talk about with you.”

“Oh, really?” The mother taps the counter in front of her, offering the stool that sets right across where is she at. “You should have a seat then.”

He curls an awkward beam, feeling the uneasiness grows in his heart with each steps taken towards Madam Lee. It is almost strange though, for Jongdae thinks that he should be familiar with the lady after all the years they were well-acquainted. Or perhaps because of that itself, because of how well-acquainted they are, that now the guy is scared to tell her the truth.

“I think I could tell what you have in your mind.” His flustered gasp is almost audible upon Madam Lee’s sharp guess that comes right next, “But if it’s about my daughter, you don’t have to worry that much. No mom in this world wouldn’t be happy to have you as their daughter’s boyfriend.” The mother chuckles at the sight of the young man’s flushed face. Now that she sees it, her old heart feels warm and delighted to see of how much Jongdae has grown right in front of his eyes. “You know I adore you a lot, right?”

Jongdae purses his lips, eyes down to his lap while scratching the back of his head as he hides a smile. “Miss Ga Eul was right, then. You’re really sharp when it comes to this.”

“That punk,” her eyes roll and she clicks her tongue jokingly. “But let’s be frank. I don’t have to be sharp to notice what’s going on between the two of you.” On the other side, the guy wishes that he could hide his face somewhere between the walls for he imagines how obvious they might be all this while. It is quite embarrassing to think that both of him and Ga Eul tried to tone everything down yet ones could see the love in air with their eyes closed. “Ga Eul, that kid. She wears her emotions on the face.”

Both of them then giggle in unison as if they have the same image of Ga Eul and her antiques playing in their mind.

“And I could tell she likes you a lot.” Jongdae’s gaze tears from the table that separates them to the elder’s face as Madam Lee slowly takes his hand, patting the back of it with a motherly, thankful smile, “Thank you, Teacher Kim. For adoring my daughter.”

He gives a half-smile for the words uttered, sensing conflicted emotions in his heart for all the affection that he received these past years and the truth that he is about to disclose soon. “Auntie,” he calls quietly, taking a deep breath in silence, “Actually, there’s another thing…”

 

 

“Jongdae?” And as if he is forcibly pulled back to the reality, the man snaps his head to the side in one quick move, blinking in confusion before tearing his gaze away from the lady, again focusing on the road. Meanwhile the latter sticks her gaze right on Jongdae’s side profile, her big round eyes shines especially bright at the moment like a puppy looking at its owner. “You’re okay, right? Or is there something bothering your mind?”

Half-supressed scoff escapes from the man, making Ga Eul thinking that her assumption might sound ridiculous to him. But from the one-sided smile that curls afterwards, she knows it wasn’t the case. The guy is simply amused by her, especially with the testing question that comes from him afterwards, “What made you thinking that way?”

“Just because.” Ga Eul pauses for a while, thinking of a way to loosen it up a little. “Or maybe because you didn’t ask me for kisses earlier.”

Their giggles then unite, filling up the small space before Jongdae pokes the lady on her waist, making she squeals in titters. “I told you that’s because the neighbours might see us, didn’t I?”

“I know, I know. Stop it…!” Her hand flies to hit Jongdae’s arm in between her giggles, ending it with a whine as she draws herself towards the door on her side to protect herself from being tickled again. “You better keep your eyes on the road, Mr. Kim.”

“Yes, ma’am.” He tightens his grip around the steering wheel, playfully putting on a serious face as he speaks, “Your wish is my command.”

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!