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Ga Eul huffs at her own hand, frustrated at the ‘paper’ sign that she made a few seconds ago which has led her brother’s victory. Immediately, she lift up her head to shoot a glare at the latter however earning nothing but the small purse that their household use to keep money for groceries. Haneul tilts, presenting a smirk and pats his sister’s shoulder lightly before leaving the lady alone, upset in the living room. “What kind of man shows a scissor instead of rock?”

“Me.” He sticks out his tongue playfully then continues to annoy, “Noona, you lose. Accept it, and go buy the snacks. Faster, faster.”

“You punk, come here!”

Upon hearing the former’s grunts, the boy quickly strides to the kitchen, seeking protection from his mother before Ga Eul could do anything.

Watching her kids’ acts, the half-century lady laughs, then raises her hand to the front to stop her daughter from coming any closer. “Stop it, you two. Why is this even a problem in the first place?”

“That little…Mom…!” Unlike her age, Ga Eul stomps her feet and whines then squints to the boy hiding behind her mother. “Come on, it’s my day off and yet he forces me to go out there and buy snacks for him?”

“But you lose…”

The lady’s eyes widen as she snaps at the owner of the voice that timidly take cover behind his mom all over again, making the scene more chaotic as if the situation is some scenes in war movies. Dizzy, the mother extends her arms to her both sides, in the next second is followed by whiny pleas from both of the siblings as their ears are getting the direct punishment for their unnecessary bickering. And it doesn’t even take any minute longer before Ga Eul and Haneul find themselves right outside of the door, standing next to each other – resenting one another for getting kicked out from the house by that chief.

“Noona, this is all your fault. I could’ve been watching the TV if it weren’t for you.”

“And I could’ve getting some sleep, for God’s sakes,” Ga Eul rolls her eyes, then lets out a heavy sigh once more as she turns and gets a sight of the stairs by them. In mumbles, she fusses of why does her car hasn’t been delivered to home yet by the shipping company.

“The store over there has only walking distance, you know?”

Haneul ignorantly voices out as he caught his sister’s murmurs, again earning a death stare from the other. Not like he cares, anyway.

“Then why can’t you walk down there and get your stuff by yourself, huh?”

“You lose, noona. Remember?”

“Why are we still arguing on this, by the way?”

The boy bobs his head a few times, agreeing then crosses his arms as he turns to the staircase in front of them – copying Ga Eul’s movements. “I know, right? Why would a 30 years old lady bickering with a kid who’s still in middle school? I don’t get it either.”

“Do you have death wish?”

“No.” Haneul purses his lips together, eyeing the elder from the corner of his cookie-brown eyes. “Why don’t we just leave together?” He suggests, expecting comply from Ga Eul. And meeting his desires, the lady agrees with her brother’s wish and quickly leads the steps downstairs – however is too dumb to realize that the boy grabs that chance to escape from the situation and slams the door from inside.

She yells at the sound of the door being locked, but that doesn’t last for another moment as for another door – definitely not hers – is opened wide before the person steps outside. Ga Eul finds herself freezes halfway, eyes pinned on the guy with his casual brown tee and sweatpants, no gel or any sort of that applied on those black raven hair of his.

Just simple. And fresh.

“You are quite a fighter, don’t you?” Jongdae’s head tilts, gazing at the lady who looks as if her mind is not there at the moment.

On the other hand, Ga Eul is flustered by the question yet she believes that she is quick to grasp on the situation and succeeds in pretending to not stare by quickly clears and walks off, ignoring the guy’s teases.

“So, are you going to the store, finally?” The younger does not gives in, as if the lady is not acting like he doesn’t exists there – he’s happily skipping down the road, following Ga Eul from behind meanwhile the other quickens her pace, bothered by Jongdae’s persistence. Ever since she was caught staring from outside the classroom the other day, the guy has been pestering her with constant ‘hellos’ and those Cheshire’s cat smiles.

Jongdae would do it anytime and anywhere as long as their eyes meet; for instance the other day at the yard while Ga Eul was hanging the laundry, the guy shouts a ‘good morning’ from the other side. Or maybe that one time he leaves a sticky notes on her door saying, ‘When will you be my friend?’ Not to forget, every day at the academy, he would peek into my classes from the glass window and waves gleefully like a little kid. And for the record, this is not the first time of him tailing her to the mart or convenient store, or their office.

Which reminds her of Jisoo’s comment a few days ago for that situation;

“You find it annoying yet you don’t do anything about it because subconsciously, you are enjoying his presence. Don’t you?”

Well, not even in anyone’s wildest dreams!

On the other hand, the reason why Jongdae does those kinds of gestures is – no reason at all. Perhaps not

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!