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Ga Eul squeezes her eyes shut, contemplating to show her face to the man again but that guy patiently waits, making her feel guilty about it also lifts a wonder on how she should cut off her own awkwardness. The lady however keeps her eyes wandering around their surrounding instead of keeping the contact. She breathes, “Did you tell my mom about it?”

Jongdae lifts his head up from looking at his own feet, confronting the lady who stood a few small steps away from him. Only now he has the chance to take a good look at the latter’s face, since all this time that person had always be running away from him, out of…unclear motives, perhaps for no reason at all. “Just the incident in front of the mart. It was my fault…that day,” he admits. Now he feels that it was stupid of him being careless about the safety, solely only to chase over a television program that will have countless times of reruns in the future.

“That’s all? You didn’t tell her about anything else?”

“Anything else…what? Do you want me to tell more? Of you yelling right on my face when we first met?”

“Pardon?”

Not believing her own ears, Ga Eul lifts her head up and her voice immediately hikes up a notch upon receiving the counter-question while the other innocently smiles as if he hasn’t shoot a bullet a few seconds ago. “By the way, I have something for…you…Miss.” Jongdae clears his throat and lifts the red box in his hand, “Please accept this.”

The lady raises a brow, questioning her neighbour’s sudden act yet the box exchanges its position as Ga Eul slowly secure what’s being given. She looks at the gift box attentively, especially when she could feel the weight of it and so the former steals a glance from behind her lashes and the man quietly nods, welcoming her to open it up.

“What’s the meaning behind this?”

“A price I have to pay…perhaps?”

She squints at the response and hesitantly checks out the content of it. “You…” Deadpanned, her words halt. And soon as Ga Eul lifts up her gaze to the other person, she meets a sincere smile before a 90° bow comes next.

“I hope I gain forgiveness in return. You even cried that moment, I can’t turn a blind eye on that,” the young man tells the guilt that he felt over what had happened that day, while the lady is still keeping shut, in fact, Ga Eul is still taken aback by that previous act – especially of how the fruits are arranged neatly in one box and it is cute to think that a guy prepared it for an apology – however still, she decides to be cool about it that leads her to clear awkwardly.

She nods a few time, approving, then reaches one hand out for a handshake. “Okay, then. I guess I’ll forgive you.”

Jongdae’s corner of the lips turn down in approval frown as he gladly takes that hand but he holds it tight when the other decides to pull away, which causes for the lady to feel confused and insisting to break the contact however fails every time she tries. Ga Eul huffs then immediately directs as glare at the former but all she sees is a sneaky smile before the man opens his mouth just to say, “I think you owe me an apology too.”

“Excuse me?” She is still giving off her death stare however the other person seems to nonchalantly ignore it all and still grinning teasingly.

“Well then, was it my fault? On the day we met?”

“You said I was staring at you…I was not…!” she insists, making the handshake breaks by itself for Jongdae flinches over the loud tone that came up out of sudden. He clearly sees the lady’s face is flushed while claiming her innocence – is it out of anger or embarrassment?

The man sighs, ready to give up, “Is it that hard to apologize?”

“Yes, since I didn’t do anything wrong.”

“Shouting right on one’s face wasn’t considered as ‘wrong’?”

“Maybe not?”

“What?” Jongdae squints in disbelief, “Come on, we’re going to see each other’s face every day anyway. Let’s settle this down real fast, okay?”

The lady still foolishly disagrees, shrugging off her shoulders then crosses her arms, “I guess we’ll just avoid seeing each other then.” And so Ga Eul stomps her feet to the door behind her, leaving the young man sighing to himself.

“We’ll see about that.”

 

 

 

“Hey.”

Jongdae greets as soon as he steps into the room, approaching his friend just to tap the latter’s shoulder before landing a small stack of resumes that he has reviewed last night on that large walnut desk that matched with the other three bookshelves behind them.

“Why are you giving it to me?”

“Can I not do it to

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!