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31.

 

The statement that came out from Shixun’s mouth boils her blood, and she is about to snap out of annoyance but a sweet voice gently calls her name has stopped her. Ga Eul shifts her gaze to the voice, meeting a calming pair of orbs. It melts her anger right away as she sees Jongdae’s concerned look. From that expression of his itself, she knows more than anything that he is totally upset by Shixun’s shameless act of come crawling back to her, but the fact that Jongdae is holding in his own emotion as he cares more of hers, she aches.

He is really kind that she feels sorry that he had to bear up this mess in her life.

Though no words being uttered between them, that one look is more than enough to convey everything as if it has been written in his eyes.

And so it brings the lady’s head shaking weakly, a weary smile slowly curls across her pink lips. “It’s okay,” she whispers. “I can handle him.”

The man slants his body slightly towards Ga Eul, “If he tries to do anything…”

“I’ll call you right away.”

Jongdae teases with a judging look, “I was going to say that you should stomp on his feet or something. But well, if you say so…” Quiet chuckles escapes from his set of lips as the other scoffs in amusement. “Alright,” he is in hesitation, to be honest. But causing another scene would make his lady feels guilty, which is why Jongdae holds it in. “I’ll wait for you upstairs then.”

She nods, those simple words insanely gives her strength and boldness to step forward towards Shixun at the same time the corner of her eyes watches Jongdae leaving.

 

 

“You were supposed to be sleeping…!”

Baekhyun grins at his friend whose eyes widened and one finger pointing at him right after the latter closes the door behind him. He puts down the bag of chips on the coffee table, one hand pulls his legs so that he is sitting comfortably with his legs crossed on the couch.

“It’s not good to sleep after a lunch!”

“Says the person who’s munching the chips right at this moment.”

For a moment, his jaws stop moving as his gaze fall to the snack on the table before pouting, “Oops.” Baekhyun blinks a few times, annoying on purpose then leans forward to his friend, “By the way you have to tell me how did that happened.”

Jongdae makes a disgusted face upon seeing the other’s sparkly eyes as the guy asked for details on his forwarded progress with Ga Eul. But he is too lazy to entertain his friend any longer, his mind is concerning on something else that is happening right down the stairs of their houses.

Though he knows that the lady would not ever coming back to her ex-boyfriend, two sentences that Shixun uttered when they were about to walk away and ignore him just now has bothered Jongdae irritatingly.

“I’ve separated with her, the kid wasn’t even my child. She lied to me.”

“Baekhyun.”

“I’m not talking to you unless you tell me how did you two ended up kissing,” the older answers, dismayed. He huffs and mumbles, “Gosh, I knew it I should’ve knocked before coming in.”

Jongdae shrugs before walking to the other side of his house, slowly open the sliding door that directs him to his veranda. For a second he pivots his head to the back, whispering, “You can choose between sulking or joining me eavesdropping.”

“What?” Spontaneously, Baekhyun’s voice comes out in a very low volume too as if the person outside would hear them.

His mouth forms an ‘O’ as he watches the younger tipping on his toes to the outside, confused on what happened but surely he can’t sit still seeing Jongdae pulling out an act he has never seen before.

“Jongdae…!” he yells a whisper, at the same time getting up from the couch and draws closer to the sliding door – just to see his friend is crouching behind the wall. “What the hell are you doing?”

The latter ignores, continuing to take a peek on the two person far downstairs having a quiet conversation by the parked car.

Baekhyun ends up stepping outside as well, slowly approaching towards his friend so that he wouldn’t get caught by whomever Jongdae is hiding from. “Oh,” he lets out a light gasp, almost laughing but also is amused on how the latter is acting right at the moment.

He never knows Jongdae has this side in him. And so the former ends up joining the spying session as he squats down by his friend, “Whoa I don’t know who that guy is but dude, your woman is going to get snatch." Baekhyun raises up his palm, pointing to the person down there, "I mean, we’re at least 18 metres away from them but look at him, he’s hot…!”

Like a reflex, Jongdae turns to his side, darting a glare right towards the other, one arm clenches a fist, “Do you have a death wish?” His tongue clicks at the sight of the older flinches before peeping the other side of the wall again, “That’s her ex.”

“What? Who?”

“Ga Eul’s ex-boyfriend…! The one who did this and this to my face.” He points to the almost-gone bruises on his cheek and the cut at the corner of his lips, leaving Baekhyun gaping in shock.

“Dae?! He punched you? What the hell actually happened?”

Realizing he would never hear a thing from up here, Jongdae sighs and lands his bum to the cement floor, turning his body so that his back leans against the wall. The guy takes a glance at

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!