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late info : Wu Shixun is Sehun's Chinese name

 

 

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“Noona?” Haneul tilts his head at his sister as soon as the lady steps into the house, his eyes scans down to his sister’s feet meanwhile the latter gives him an uninterested quick glance before she walks to the kitchen and put down the paper bag that she hugs along the way walking home. “Where did you came from?”

“Mart.”

“Then why do you look like that?”

By ‘that’ he clearly means Ga Eul’s miserable and overly-tired face, together with her torn pants on the knee part. Of course, even Ga Eul herself wouldn’t stand having the sight of her this way. However what could she do? It already happened, and it’s all that guy’s fault!

Again, she walk passes her brother who is still waiting for her answer as the former loyally eyeing each of her steps. “My blood is still boiling, you better don’t ask anything,” Ga Eul’s eyes shifts to her brother in a glance then take a glass from the rack, setting it down to the table. The boy smiles, quietly pour the water from the jug for his sister. “Where were you just now? Mom didn’t even call you for helping her with the groceries. See? Now I’m the victim.”

“I was studying. Got a mid-term test next week.”

“You better do great then.” Her hand gestures into a slitting throat action, “Or I’ll kill you.”

Ga Eul was about to leave for her room but Haneul tugs on her shirt and lightly pushes his elder sister to the couch, only right then the lady realizes that her brother has the first aid kit in his other hand. Instead of questioning the former’s words towards him, that boy sighs as soon as he sees the scratches on her kneecap. “So you fell down?”

“Not my fault.”

“Then?”

“A scooter.”

“What?!” Haneul raises his voice up right away, making the lady flinches out of shock. His eyes widen while that face of his scrunches, expressing his disbelief. “And that person doesn’t do anything about it?”

“I ran away before he could do anything.”

“Why did you even…is he a ert? That’s why you ran home?”

A crease forms on Ga Eul’s face as she spends some thought about the guy she met for the second time just now. From their first encounter, that guy is the one who did something nice, even with the little incident back then at the mart. The guy always be smiling or apologizes meanwhile she is always be the one who gets worked up out of nowhere, in the contrary. “No, I think he’s a kind young man. He said sorry for…I don’t know, countless times?”

“Fool,” Haneul murmurs however loud enough for me to hear it. Perhaps he purposely wants me to hear that. “Then why did you ran away? Exaggerate a bit, ask for compensation or something. Make money out of it.”

Out of it, that 15 years-old kid earn a hit on the back of his head, as he deserve to get one.

“Do you have a death wish? Where did you learn to do immoral things like that?”

“Then why did you ran away instead of accepting someone’s apology?” The boy pouts, rubbing his sore head. “You said he said sorry, yet you get mad as if he did you wrong,” Haneul continues letting out his thoughts freely while finishing his touch by applying the Band-Aid on his sister’s knee. That boy beams, tilting his head up to glance at that sister of his. “You’ve always told me to be kind, don’t you? Since that’s what Dad had always told you to.”

On the mention of Dad, the lady’s memory automatically reminds her of something that lifts a thin smile on her face. “I know, right? I should’ve been nicer to people.” Her tone has turn much softer then she breathes, “I haven’t visited him yet.”

 

 

 

 

Jongdae straighten his sitting posture immediately as soon as he finds out something while reviewing all the resumes for the job interview that will be held tomorrow. As the co-founding members of the tuition centre he’s working at, Jongdae has been responsible for this whenever they receive the applications. He pushes his spectacles on the bridge of his nose, narrow his eyes to reconfirm what he just stumble upon on that piece of paper.

“Noh Ga Eul,” the man mumbles the name quietly, his fingers grazes on his face; lining down his jaws as those lips turns down. “This address…,” Jongdae hums, counting what’s lingering in his head before letting out a loud gasp and covers his mouth by his own two hands. “She’s Aunt Lee’s daughter! I was right the whole time…!”

Jongdae remembers that the first time they met, he asked her if she is his front door’s neighbour however the lady insisted that she lives at the other house upstairs. Of course, Jongdae wasn’t there for an argument so he just let it slide though he knows well that the owner of the house upstairs is the landlord lady. And the landlord has no daughter.

Again, his mind shifts through time but now he r

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!