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“I love you, Ga Eul. I'm madly in love with you.”

Her world halts immediately as a strange feeling wraps around her heart for she finally hears those words she has been longing for. All this time, Ga Eul thought that she would be the first to confess, and when she told him everything that she has been keeping by her own – she thought the man would feel uncomfortable as she might be rushing it. With her mind is still in a daze with the surprise kiss, the unexpected love confession that comes next makes her mind completely blank.

Only after a silent sigh that the lady realizes that she has been holding her breath the whole time.

And out of nowhere, her vision turns blurry for tears that has been pooling in her eyes once more that day. Her lips gradually stretches downward, pouting as one arm raises to her face. “You one crazy guy,” she murmurs just enough for Jongdae to hear, at the same time brushing off the running tears with her sleeves, making the others stand in between flustered and panicking as she starts sobbing.

“If you really feel that way then why were you being too careful around me all this while? What exactly has made you hold back?” Ga Eul glances up through her lashes, frowning, “How could you only say this now?”

Her weeps grows louder like a little kid whilst Jongdae stays silent, his heart swells from the guilt for making the lady waits for so long.

“I’m sorry.”

“You should be…!” she fusses in frustration, yet still sounds lovely to the other. The pout on her lips stays, Ga Eul gives a glare towards the man before she throws herself towards his arms without warning. Her arms circles around his neck, the lady’s small face buries on Jongdae’s shoulder as she whines, muffled, “I was so scared you’d ridicule me…”

The man melts into a smile, full of amusement and fondness upon the other’s adorable behaviour. “Why would I do that…?” His arm slides around her small figure, pulling her closer whilst slightly waves side to side, another hand trails up before gently caressing Ga Eul’s locks. “That was so cool of you. Thank you for saying the truth, I was too fool to know I’ve made you thinking that way this whole time.” Jongdae lands a peck on the crown of her hair then rest his lips on the same spot. “I’ve made you wait, didn’t I?”

She nods a few times, half of her face is still dived in the same spot.

“I’ve never waited for anyone. You’re the first one.”

“What a lucky guy I am.”

“You bet,” she answers it right away, receiving a burst of laughter from Jongdae as the latter is tickled by the former’s constant way of talking.

His brows furrow as he hisses, pulling away for a bit to check on the lady’s face. Jongdae tilts his head to the side, his nose scrunches, “You’re acting like a baby.”

“So it’s annoying?”

“So it’s adorable…!” His loud laugh echoes, did not expect the assumption that comes from the other whose eyes is watching the man’s Adam apple bobbing up and down his throat. “Gosh, do you think babies are annoying?”

Ga Eul shrugs, “Sometimes.” Her hands slides down to wrap Jongdae’s waist, tugging on his shirt. “But Jin Hee is cute, I love her. We should go and visit her, it’s been a while since I met Jisoo.” Soon as the latter agrees with a nod, once more, the former dives her face into the man’s shoulder, loving his scent a little bit too much. She shut her eyes, appreciating the warm hug that they are sharing now and strangely, his hug doesn’t really send the electrifying feels as the lady thought it would be.

With him, it conveys a comforting and familiar vibes.

As if everything is meant to be this way.

“Jongdae.”

He hums in response, giving one last peck on the lady’s forehead before she pulls away for a bit, gaze twinkling at him.

“Thank you.”

She could not find the right words on what’s the reason behind those words as there is too much to thank him for. Ga Eul holds too much wonderful feelings within herself as she sees Jongdae’s pair of brown orbs shining as he bore his eyes on hers, lips sweetly curling upwards as he leans in once more – this time interlacing their fingers as their lips connects with a kiss. His touch is like the beating of butterfly’s wings, soft until it becomes addictive.

Nothing could have possibly meant more than them, nothing could have more beauty than this moment; of how their hands fit perfectly as if it has been mould for each other, the way her round eyes fluttered to a close and of how both of them shares the same thought about the food that lies on the table – waiting to be eaten again – that she could hear the crinkling of his smile, which starts her giggling too.

Also Jongdae has completely forgot on the other person who is supposed to join them for lunch that day, right until the sound of the front door clicking open is heard and a flat-toned remark from the third person that comes immediately afterwards, “I’ll come in another day…”

The lovebirds pull away in panic, snapping their heads right towards the door that is slowly being shut again before turning to each other again.

A gasp escapes from Ga Eul, “Please don’t tell me that’s Baekhyun.”

The man scratches the back of his head before sheepishly smiles, leading to the other’s puppy whine as she cups her flushed face. Ga Eul’s pair of eyes are faster than ever, shooting a glare right towards the former. Yet it couldn’t last long as she sees the pouty face from him as he whispers, “Then what are we going to do now?”

She melts into soft giggles, one hand tugs on Jongdae’s sleeve – stealing glance at his confused face in between. Ga Eul then darts a quick peck on his cheek, before patting his shoulder two times with the same giggle lingering on her lips, definitely bringing mo

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!