twenty-five

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25.

 

“Something bothering you?”

Quite flustered upon the sudden question, my eyes blink rapidly as I lift my head up, following the hand that places a cup of black coffee on the table whilst her other hand is occupied with hers. Jisoo pulls out a chair for her to sit on, her gaze is still directed on me – waiting for an answer. However instead of words, I could only shrug and sigh before leaning my back against the chair.

“You don’t want to talk about it?”

“I wish I would have the option to do that…” I huff, sipping up the drink and fills the space between us with silence again as I enjoy the sweetness in the wholly bitter taste that is conquering my oral cavity. My lips pursed together as I glance at the latter then curls a beam. “How’s Jin Hee? On what time you’d pick her up?”

Jisoo lifts her wrist to check the time as she tells, “Supposedly in another hour–” looking up, she smiles and raises her brows, “–but Jinyoung get off from work early today, so he’ll be the one picking her up.” My lips turn down in an amused frown, yet not saying a thing to let my friend to continue, “The kid is now in a strict ‘diet control’, you know? Her teeth are budding prettily so now her dad tells everyone to not give sweets or chocolate for this time being.”

My giggles echoes along with Jisoo’s – thinking of Jinyoung pulling of a ‘classic dad’ act for their only daughter.

“I miss my Jin Hee,” I pout, remembering the cute little sunshine radiating her smile with a pair of big shiny eyes.

“Come visit us then, Jin Hee misses her auntie too.” My friend then wiggles her brows at me, “But make sure you bring Jongdae as well, my kid seems to love him more than she loves you.”

I squint while clucking my tongue upon those words, especially when Jisoo’s laugh echoes, enjoying my annoyance. “Excuse me, I’m the second mom, he’s just a new guy.”

“Right, that’s why she likes him more. Jin Hee had it enough with you.”

I fake a glare at the lady who’s sitting on the other side of the square table as she titters gleefully over the matter. At the same moment, my mind is still considering on how to talk to Jisoo about one thing that has been pestering my head. Though I don’t think Jongdae would feel that way – the reason behind his change lately – I can’t help but to have doubts. I had it once and that was enough.

I don’t want to go through this all over again.

Especially when it is Jongdae.

A loud one-clap snaps me back to the reality, my attention then shifts toward my friend once more.

“Oh, right. About that Jongdae guy. I told you he seems familiar, right?”

“You did?” my brows furrow, “When?”

She lifts a brown, eyes wandering upwards as if she was trying to find a memory above her head. “I didn’t?” Then a shrug comes, brushing off lazily, “Whatever then. But anyways…! Remember, a long time ago. When I keep pestering you about the art gallery near my place?” The lady waits for me to bob my head, permitting her to continue. “I saw him there a few times.”

“And for how many times you’ve been there?” A lazy chuckles of disbelief spurts, “Do you like the place that much?”

Jisoo shakes her head rapidly, a finger points to a random direction outside, “Not me, but your friend Park Jinyoung does…! Can’t blame him though, the food they served at the café there is freaking delicious. Top tier, I just found out it is pretty popular on social media.” She takes out her phone, distractedly talks while having her eyes on the screen, searching for something. “But really, we’d eat there at least once in two weeks and I saw him almost every time. He was there too yesterday, but we only talked briefly with him since we were already in our way out at the moment.”

My lids part a little bit further whilst sipping the drink, “Really?” The conversation halts as the buzzer in my hand vibrates which leads me to get off the couch quickly, getting the tray of my order that has been readied at the counter. I see twinkle in Jisoo’s eyes as she cranes her neck, looking at her strawberry soufflé pancake that jiggles along with every steps that I take. For a few minutes afterwards, our attention are fully devoted to the dessert that lies before our eyes, blinding our thoughts from the whole conversation that we had earlier.

Right until that friend of mine touches the topic again after we blabber on how nice it was to have the sweet taste melts in our mouth now. “Only after seeing him yesterday that I remember noticing him a few times before. You don’t find it weird? Eul?”

“Why should I?” I dive the spoon into the glass bowl of ice-cream I’m having, hitting its bottom surface. “He’s an art teacher. Man got a whole degree in creative arts and design, why should I find it weird that he’s there?”

“You don’t see art teachers hanging out at galleries all time.”

“Well, you did. And you don’t even study the field. Maybe he’s just a regular there too, our neighbourhood is not even that far from yours.” I scratch the back of my head, couldn’t help but to feel a little bit confused on why my friend is making this matter as if it is a big deal. Jongdae is a young man who has a life to live so why should

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!