eighteen

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18.

 

The corner of my lips turns upward as I receive a ‘thank you’ from my student who just came for a consult, since the entrance examination is just around the corner. The whole academy gets busier during this time around, seeing my colleagues walking back and forth to the photocopy room, to the consultation office with the student’s parents, or to the classroom – I feel alive. This quiet place strangely feels a little lively with this atmosphere. But that also includes me seeing Jongdae a little lesser, the only time we see each other around is when we left for work every morning. However that hardly happens nowadays as well, he leaves early in the morning and I only hear his door beeping at late nights as he stays back in his office.

And it gets weirder when I realize that I am actually bothered by it.

It can’t be that I have…

The words in my mind flies away immediately when I feel my feet hardly touches the ground and instead, my body is about to bump to the floor as I tripped onto something there – however on the next second, I find myself in someone’s arm. His soft chuckles echoes in my head as I am still in the process of grasping the whole situation. “You really shouldn’t space out while walking, Miss Ga Eul.”

My eyes blink a few times while snapping my head up, and when his laughter burst off again at my face – it finally hits me. A short scream comes out from my mouth as I tear myself apart from him by one step to the back as blush crawls up my cheeks.

“I’m…sorry, Mr. Byun.” My lips pressed to each other as I contain the embarrassment whilst Baekhyun’s head tilts to the side as he enjoys watching me fidgeting like a scared puppy. His hand waves lazily as an ‘it’s okay’ sign along with the sound of his laughter fades as seconds pass.

“What were you thinking so deeply, anyway?”

“Um, nothing in particular.” I notice that I answer it a bit too fast as if I was hiding something thus it brings the clear doubts in my employer’s face as one of his brows lift up. “I should…probably go.”

“No, wait.”

That command halts my steps immediately and his head dips a bit as he shoots a look at his wristwatch, checking out the time. And in that brief moment, my eyes capture a sight of my boss serving looks in his grey dress shirt paired with black slacks and a pair of leather shoes – his dark brown hair reflects his white porcelain skin even more and I’m pretty sure that skin is better than mine. Or maybe equally good, since mine is undeniably clear too.

“What do you say if we grab a lunch together?”

“What?” I am visibly taken aback by the offer as my hand dramatically lands right above my chest as I ask again for confirmation, “With me? Just the two of us?”

“Yes,” he nods, those pink lips hinting a small pout that looks natural as he sees my face in hesitation upon his move. And so those lips of his parts again, stating, “There’s something I need to tell you.”

 

 

“Noona, you come home late, again?” I raise my gaze up and meet Haneul’s lifted brows that is sewn with concern and…suspicion. However not did I bother for it, I only wiggle my brows as a response and leans down, taking off my shoes just before I step into the house. My body feels tired from all the walking here and there in those heels, the tense in my ankles are killing me. “This has been going on for several days, where did you go this time?”

My eyes roll to the back of my head upon the question as for this kid interrogates me for no reason, even our mother don’t do that. The boy keeps on butting my way, never a second that his mouth stays shut as he ask the same type of question again and again, growing the irritation inside me.

“How many times have I told you? I went out with my boss…!”

“Your boss?” My head snaps to the side upon catching that voice in the house, and so the guy comes to my sight. My shocked, dilated pupils meet his crooked brows whilst Jongdae puckers his pinkish-red lips as he questions, “You went out with Baekhyun? On weekend?”

“What are you doing here?”

I cover my own mouth, noticing that I was half-yelling for I was flustered to see him here unexpectedly. He is one of the rarest sight nowadays, I wonder why he is even busier than the president himself. And it feels strange inside, to finally see him again as we last spoke to each other was during the school festival last week.

“To have dinner with us, of course.” Mom appears from the kitchen then leaves her mittens at the counter before she takes a seat. “It’s been a while, don’t you think? Both of you have be

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!