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“Ga Eul, are you sure? No regrets?”

I widen my eyes at Jisoo, giving her a disbelief look over that same question that she has been repeating for the seventh time. Meanwhile Jinyoung who is standing behind her only covers his mouth, laughing without sound as he watches our acts. “Excuse me, mister. Please take your wife in, she’s one stubborn woman.” And he was still laughing when he finally steps forward, gently holds Jisoo by her shoulders.

“Honey, Eul’s house isn’t that far. She’ll be fine if she only took the bus back home.”

“That’s what I’m saying, it’s not that far. Not even an hour drive, but why is she insisting to not have us send her back?”

I huff as Jinyoung shrugs at me, indicating that he has already done his part – even that wasn’t really helping earlier, “For God’s sake, it’s not like I’m going to die if I take the bus by my own. You guys have already done so much since yesterday.” I take my friend’s hand and pulls her into a hug, pat her back a few times. “Let’s meet some other day, okay? Take care.”

Jisoo is pouting when I pull away but I just giggle off it then shifts my gaze to her husband, “Thank you for letting me stay last night, I’ve troubled you two in the middle of the night.”

“No, please don’t say that.” He bows back at me then continues, “You’re welcomed to this house anytime.”

“Please say my goodbye to Jin Hee too.” It’s a shame that that kid has not wake up yet at this hour. I only had the chance to see her once last night when she was soundly sleeping in the baby court. That girl has really grown up a lot, it still quite surreal for me to the fact that Jisoo is a mother of a child now. Feels like it was only last month that we had our high school years spent together, going to arcade after school or having a sleepover at each other’s house just to watch some anime together.

“You don’t have to go home this early, though…well, you said last night that you want to go to that gallery?”

“Maybe next time, I miss my mom so much right now.”

She nods, understood then finally gives me one final hug. Her expression has been better than before. I guess she’s not mad anymore. “I should at least send you to the bus station, but well you haven’t changed a bit, still very hard to be convinced. Tell your mom I’ll be coming soon to pay a visit!”

And I’m finally coming home.

 

Ga Eul stop right in front of the staircase, then tilt her head up – wondering how the heck she is going to move her two luggage up there all by herself. Looking at the watch, it’s only 9 o’clock now. Haneul must be in school at this hour so he wouldn’t be here to help. And Mom–, as if she would dare to ask for her help. “No choice, Ga Eul”, the lady mumble to herself and then take in air as much as she could, those small hands of hers grip at one of the bags.

As she climb up the staircase one by one, a sound of door opening attracts her attention, revealing an unfamiliar young man coming downstairs – and the woman couldn’t help but to look up at him.

His fashion looks casual, only wearing a plain white tee and tracksuits and to say that he is good-looking, this guy is already in the above average tier – which could not be compared to her own boyfriend who is in the god’s tier of handsomeness – but there is a strangely nice aura that he exude which glued her eyes on him. He looks plainly…beautiful.

And when the guy’s steps halt in the middle with his eyes meeting hers, only then Ga Eul realized that she has been staring at him for too long. “Do you need some help?”

“Pardon?” She blink a few times, getting herself together at the moment and Ga Eul find her face flushed out of nowhere.

The man then smiles to himself, more accurately holding back his chuckles at how he sees the lady blushes then repeats himself, this time more politely. “Do you need some help, miss? Because you’ve been staring at me –”

“Excuse me?” My eyes widened at him, “When did I ever–?”

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!