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14.

 

“I thought I told you two to go home…!” Ga Eul frowns at her brother and Jongdae as soon as she sees them waiting by the main entrance especially when she notices that the day has already dark, then like nothing had happened, the lady clucks her tongue at the young man before taking the car key away from the latter’s hand. “I don’t care about the deal this morning. I’ll drive home.”

And that is how Jongdae is left confused up until now.

Almost a week has passed but there is never once that misery appears on the lady’s face. Apparently she has not tell about the current status of her and Shixun’s relationship to any single soul, neither about the conversation that they had, not even to her mother. There was no sign of tears, nor any muffled cry sound from the bedroom. That is what Jongdae has gathered from Haneul, “Noona looks like she doesn’t care about anything that has happened. It’s weird, but that’s the sister that I know,” was what the boy has told Jongdae a few days ago.

That was the case for him as well, she talks to him as she had always does – that tongue is still sharp like the way it is, she laughs, she jokes, she teaches, and she mingles with everyone at the academy like that very day was just a regular weekend.

She looks too normal for someone who had just went through a break up – if she did – yet it would be too ridiculous if she haven’t, especially when not one, but all three of them had witnessed the said boyfriend was cheating behind her back. Literally.

All of that, which is why Jongdae’s concern rises even higher, though by just looking at it from the side. Whether if Ga Eul continues her relationship with that two-timer or they already ended everything between both of them, the current state of Ga Eul would be questionable.

“The one you’re looking for took a half day today.”

Jongdae hisses in annoyance as he steps backward then pivots to his left, encounter no one but Baekhyun – as if there is no one else are working there in the building. His brows draw together, lifted, “Are you a stalker? You pop out from nowhere every single time I’m here.”

“You’re the one who got caught in act of peeking in front of the office like one, but I’m the stalker? Most of people would have a different opinion but let’s just leave it at that.” Baekhyun rolls his eyes then crosses his arms across his chest, tilting his head with a judging face, “You could’ve just call her if you want to talk. You two have now become friends, so why bother being like this again, seriously.”

Jongdae has no answer for that, even he himself is not sure the exact reason why he is acting this way, because hell yes, he should have just contact her like usual! “I don’t want to be so obvious. It’ll annoy her.” The former hugs himself, rubbing one hand on his other arm while mumbling the logical assumption, “Especially when she just had her heart broken.”

“She had a boyfriend?”

“Has or had, I don’t know. But both of us saw the guy with another woman.”

“And she was being cheated on?!”

As quick as possible, Jongdae jerks his body in front to put his palm covering his friend’s loud mouth then turns to their left and right, checking out if both of them drawing anyone’s attention. The latter frowns, but his steps could not help but to quicken as he strides along the hallway – with his hand being pulled towards his friend’s office room – before the door slammed shut behind them.

The younger hisses, leaving Baekhyun clearly confused as he blinks his eyes rapidly at that friend of his. “What? Is that something we can’t talk of in public?” he wonders then asks for more details, “So all this while, she had a boyfriend? No wonder she’d only smile every time I flirted with her…”

“You what?”

“Well, hello. I’m not you who keep on sneaking like a thief. If I want something, I strike…!” Baekhyun gestures his hand in a chopping movement making the other squints as the sarcastic comment hits him right on the mark.

“So you want her?”

“No, but if you’re late then that’s on you. You know really well that I’m a charmer, right? I can’t guarantee but maybe sooner or later…”

“Byun Baekhyun!”

Jongdae yells quietly in frustration but not that the older cares in the first place, instead he is giggling. It tickles his heart when he could flush Jongdae’s face red and drive that friend of his crazy. While he walks towards the table that has a plaque with “KIM JONGDAE, EXECUTIVE DIRECTOR” carved on it, the former sighs then dips himself to the couch before sighing, “If you’re not serious with her then don’t flirt. She might misunderstand that.”

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!