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12.

 

“No way, Haneul. I’m too lazy to go anywhere today, don’t make me lift even a finger. Please.”

And so I turn myself to the other side, facing the wall before covering my face with my pillow again, refusing to wake up just because my brother wants to go to the department store for his class’s stuff that I’m not even sure what it is. However the boy keeps on insisting, he stomps his feet and whines like a puppy as he frowns, “But you said that too yesterday.” He sighs then grips on the pillow that I am hugging, “Please…Noona….I really need you to drive me there.”

Annoyed by his plea since I really planned not to do anything today, but after all, I get myself up. In a sitting position with both eyes are shut, I grunt, “Why can’t you just go by yourself? You have your bicycle, and…” I raise a finger up in the air showing a random position, “…the bus stop is just down the street, at the junction…!”

“It’s really cold out there, I won’t dare to let the chills touch my skin,” Haneul condemns while femininely running his fingers on his arms and face with the same pout stays on his face, making me roll my eyes around whilst tucking all my hair up before tying them into a loose bun.

“As if I didn’t have the exact same reason of why I don’t want to go out today. I really don’t want to, you know?” I huff as I extend my legs to get off from bed and squint at him, “Why did you even chose to go today, isn’t there any other time?”

“Today is the last day I’ll have time to shop for those stuff because tomorrow we’d start the preparation.”

“Okay to be honest I still have no idea on what this whole thing is all about but I’m going to ask you on it later.” My hands meet each other as a quick two-times clap as my head tip to the door before I head myself towards the closet, “Now go get out of here, I’m getting changed.”

Upon uttering that, my ears catch a silent victory cheer escapes from my brother’s mouth but I only shake it off with a shrug. I knew it all beforehand, that I will, in any possible way, be defeated by any of Haneul’s request – even I myself have no idea how much that I love him – so it doesn’t feel bad at all to lose to him. However the feeling automatically dies as it is replaced by confusion, making my newly-changed shirt only get halfway-buttoned when I hear a sentence from someone just before the door shut properly.

“So, is she going?”

My legs are fast at making those steps towards the door before pulling the knob almost hurriedly, earning a perplexed expression from two of the people who are waiting outside – but my eyes are focusing on one, and definitely not Haneul. “What are you doing here? And why did you ask if I’m going or not?”

“Perhaps because I’m going to tag along…?”

My brows lifted, judging as I meet Jongdae’s sheepish smile and his fingers fidgeting to each other – before my brother adds to make things clearer, “I asked Jongdae hyung to help me with our class’s exhibition, he knows what to buy.”

“Then why can’t you two just ride on his scooter?”

“It’s cold out there…remember?”

My eyes squint at Jongdae, this whole thing on fishing me out from the house is obviously his idea! “And what do you mean this person knows what to buy? You’re saying that I don’t?” I gasp in disbelief at the statement because well, they must be just school stuff, it can’t be that hard!

However Haneul seems unamused, he crosses his arms and tilts at me, “Let’s be real here Noona, you don’t even know that painting brushes have their own sizes.”

“I sure do!” I exclaim in defence, continuing, “My make-up brushes have different sizes too…!”

This time, Jongdae takes his turn in questioning, “Okay, how about…at what age did you found out that crayons and oil pastels aren’t the same thing?”

My lips pursed together, a crease form on my temple as I turn to the man, and my voice goes lower than before as I hesitatingly ask, “So…they are not…?”

“Oh my god, I thought Haneul was just exaggerating…you really are that bad…!” The guy’s jaw drops, meanwhile my brother gives his victory smirk as he pushes me back into the room, “Okay we can talk about later because we’re running out of time, tik tok tik tok!”

 

 

“Say one thing about it and I’ll make you two walk yourself home.”

Jongdae conceals his laugh behind his wide grin, his pair of orbs gives the lady a few quick glances as she stomps pass both of the younger guys, into the department store. Meanwhile the youngest gives the former a look and tips his head towards inside, before both of them making their way into their exact destination – the huge stationary shop.

Within seconds, those pair of ‘siblings’ have walked passed Ga Eul, leaving her a few steps behind but instead of minding them, she lets her feet guide her to wander around another place and searches for any stores that could catch her attention. It is the first time for Ga Eul to step into this mall because ten years ago, this place was still un

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nadwifeygd
#1
Chapter 38: my heart hurtSsss both of them feel responsible for that incident but in the end, gaeul be the one to cut it out.... i hope they can get back together after they healed from the bad memories
baekroses_
#2
Chapter 36: Awww it's broke my heart reading this ㅠㅡㅠ.
Jongdae must not expected the reaction.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter
Bubbleblue1994
#3
Chapter 35: I'm crying so hard right now.
I thought it'd like Jongdae predicted. Where he'll be the one who'll beg for forgiveness and Gaeul will hate him because he's the brother.
BUT I DIDN'T EXPECTED GAEUL TO BLAME HERSELF LIKE THIS. This is so heartbreaking. Like so heartbreaking. They're both good people, but why fate being like this to them.
I understand why Gaeul blame herself, if only she wasn't hesitating for too long, maybe she can come and talk to Hwan and maybe Hwan would still be here. But it's not her fault too. She lost someone precious to her, she needs times to adjusting well to the new life without her father. I hope she won't blame herself anymore.
I read this chapter twice, at first I was kinda mad at Jongdae to let go of her hand, because his actions made it looked like he agreed that if she came earlier, his brother would still alive, and he wouldn't be all alone in this world now. But maybe, he's just too shocked as well. Maybe he suddenly wondered why he didn't think of this scenario before. It's kinda selfish of him. But I still appreciate how he quickly realized it and tried to wait for her even tho in the end he left without saying goodbye.
In the end, he left and she wasn't dare to show up too. I feel so bad for them. When they see each other again later, I hope they'll be fine. I hope, they're not two people who lived in regret and pain anymore. Please, be happy later. :')
Is it selfish of me if I say I still want them to be together? Maybe after both healed? :')
Author-nim, do you know Writer Lee? The one who wrote the script for Reply Series and Hospital Playlist? I think the way you write this story kinda reminds me of her. You don't necessarily need a villain to create a conflict and in your story. The story focused on the main characters, both are good people, with good heart. It doesn't have to be love triangle to make the story more interesting. You don't have this complicated mysterious or anything in this story, yet you successfully captured every emotions sooooo well. I really admire you. ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you so much for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
nadwifeygd
#4
Chapter 34: im scared what will happen later aaaaa what a fateful moment. sooner or later, gaeul will know the truth and it depends o her whether she wants to accept jongdae or not..... i hope she wont abandon jongdae bcs she still has her mother and brother but jongdae only has baekhyun and her as his family :(
baekroses_
#5
Chapter 34: Uuuuu what a cliffhanger there ㅎㅎ. So it looks like Gaeul's mom already know the story. Aaaa Jongdae so brave to do that and i hope the result will be good. Im curious what will happen next if Gaeul know the story,what will happen with their relay then.. thanks for the update and i looking forward for the next one
Bubbleblue1994
#6
Chapter 34: Woahhhhhhh my mind goes blank ㅠ.ㅠ
I wanted to wrote a really long comment about Jongdae met Mr. Lee, probably told her the truth and asked her permission to date Gaeul. But what's with the last part? Did Gaeul ever tried to look for the kid that her father helped? Did she found Jongdae's house because of that? I think she thought Jongdae was the one who's her father help ㅠ.ㅠ
Whatever it is, I want her to listen to Jongdae first. Her reaction kinda scares me ㅠ.ㅠ
Thank you for the update! See you! Take care! ♥
Bubbleblue1994
#7
Chapter 33: Hehehe. I'm actually kinda happy when Jongdae said he gets lonely at home. It means he's used to Gaeul's presence now. He lived alone for years, so staying alone at home shouldn't be that lonely for him. But maybe because Gaeul always with him most of the time now, he suddenly feel lonely when she's not around.
Oh god. My heart. This is so lovely. Too muvh fluff to handle. Hehehe. But I like it. Especially now that Jongdae is starting to opening up. And the way Gaeul treated him was so sweet.
Eh? Hhhmm what kind of secret that Jongdae hide? Seems like Gaeul is kinda mad (?)
Thank you for the update!!! Hope you're doing well. See you! Take care!
baekroses_
#8
Chapter 33: The fluff on this chap was killing me ㅠㅠㅠ that's too adorable to handle. Thanks for the update and looking forward for jongdae's secret.
Bubbleblue1994
#9
Chapter 32: So, the woman was cheating on Shixun too? That's karma. Tch. Why he tried to meet Gaeul again? Maybe he thought she'll consider going back to him? LOL. At least, this time he came to talk when he's sober.
I agreed with Gaeul. I don't think Shixun still loves her. Or maybe he do, but his heart isn't entirely hers anymore. Maybe he loves Gaeul and that woman at the same time? Or maybe he loves that woman? But he's used to have Gaeul beside him, that's why he came back? I know in relationship sometimes just love isn't enough. There will be time when you got bored of your partner, or you feel suffocated and want to escape the relationship for a while. But it doesn't give you rights to cheat on them. If you do, maybe you're actually falling out of love.
I'm glad seeing them talk about this. We need a proper closure, right? Hehehe.
Okay. So, when's the wedding date? LOL
Thank you for the update! I didn't knew I need this chapter. Shixun was once a big part of Gaeul's life, so it's nice to see them officially moved on and had a proper goodbye. See you! Take care!
Bubbleblue1994
#10
Chapter 31: Jongdae is so fcking sweet. Oh god. He's the sweetest ever. I swear. His confessions was simple yet so genuine. And when he realized how he made she feels all these times with his actions, I hope he realized that he's worth that much. That there's someone who treasure him a lot. Who's always patiently waiting for him to make a move. You're so loved by people around you, Jongdae.
Baek and Gaeul's relationship is kinda cute sometimes. Not in romantic way, but more like siblings/ friendly way. I love how Baek just casually called Gaeul 'big sis'. Hehehe.
Okay. Now what Shixun? You're just here to apologize and leave, right? Please, Gaeul already happy. No more drama, drama king. Tch.
Thank you for the update! See you soon! Take care!