Ripped: Forget
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Title: Forget
Author: vvipforseungri
Reviewer: PBjellotime
Owner Rating: GTG
Status:Picked-up and credited.
Posted: 12.14.12
Your Story is Called What?!: ☠☠☠☠
Too short and unoriginal. Even if it fits in well with the story, it isn’t going to attract much attention to new readers. But maybe because it’s a short story it sort of does fit in well?
So this Thing Right Here...That's a Description and a Foreword...? You've Got to be Kidding Me: ☠☠☠☠☠
Too short and unoriginal. Even if it fits in well with the story, it isn’t going to attract much attention to new readers. But maybe because it’s a short story it sort of does fit in well?
So this Thing Right Here...That's a Description and a Foreword...? You've Got to be Kidding Me: ☠☠☠☠☠
Descriptions are actually supposed to ‘describe’ the plot of your story, not tell the reader about the ‘word count’ and rating. I guess the ‘summary’ was supposed to be the description but it’s not really that appealing but I guess it isn’t too bad, it could be worse! Also there wasn’t even a foreword.
I'm Ready To Stab Your Characters Now: ☠☠
Since it was a short story you couldn’t really develop your characters enough but I felt that the way you wrote about them was very good and made them rather realistic!
Are You Sure You Know What You're Doing: ☠☠
Woah the plot of this story was depressing as hell but it was very well written in my opinion. It actually had me pulling on my hair when GDragon cut Seungri. The entire plot was making me wonder what ever made the writer think about writing this but it still made an interesting story. The only problem I have was that it didn’t really fit the criteria of a story, it was just a big complication, the two boys cutting them selves.
Better Stay In School and Listen to your English professor: ☠
I normally pick up on every mistake and typo but from what I read I found absolutely no problem! I’m impressed to be honest o.o
I Can See Why You Like Writing Better Than Arts: ☠☠☠☠☠
Well I checked and there were exactly ZERO pictures on the story, not even a backgroud. I’m a little bored.
*YAAAWNNNN* Meter: ☠☠
I'm Ready To Stab Your Characters Now: ☠☠
Since it was a short story you couldn’t really develop your characters enough but I felt that the way you wrote about them was very good and made them rather realistic!
Are You Sure You Know What You're Doing: ☠☠
Woah the plot of this story was depressing as hell but it was very well written in my opinion. It actually had me pulling on my hair when GDragon cut Seungri. The entire plot was making me wonder what ever made the writer think about writing this but it still made an interesting story. The only problem I have was that it didn’t really fit the criteria of a story, it was just a big complication, the two boys cutting them selves.
Better Stay In School and Listen to your English professor: ☠
I normally pick up on every mistake and typo but from what I read I found absolutely no problem! I’m impressed to be honest o.o
I Can See Why You Like Writing Better Than Arts: ☠☠☠☠☠
Well I checked and there were exactly ZERO pictures on the story, not even a backgroud. I’m a little bored.
*YAAAWNNNN* Meter: ☠☠
No comment.
VERDICT: ☠☠☠/☠☠☠☠☠
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