Ripped: A Mission Gone Wrong-?
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Title: A Mission Gone Wrong-?
Author: DubuMint
Reviewer: maggie-scole
Owner Rating: Good to go.
Posted: 12.10.12
Your Story is Called What?!: ☠
I actually don't have anything to complain on the title. It's pretty much original and -of course- very relevant to the story itself.
So this Thing Right Here...That's a Description and a Foreword...? You've Got to be Kidding Me!: ☠☠☠
So this Thing Right Here...That's a Description and a Foreword...? You've Got to be Kidding Me!: ☠☠☠
Usually, when I would to choose a spy-themed stories/books, I would judge it by the summary- which is the foreword and description. To me, this wasn't as inviting and didn't portray the theme quite perfectly. But there was nothing seriously wrong about this.
I'm Ready To Stab Your Characters Now: ☠
As an avid SHINee fan, I applaud you from the depths of my feels. You certainly wrote them exceptionally accurate. Excellent job.
Are You Sure You Know What You're Doing?: ☠
Are You Sure You Know What You're Doing?: ☠
Again, tremendously done. I couldn't ask for more, except for a longer flow of story.
Better Stay In School and Listen to your English professor: ☠
Nothing to rip off here. I even read your story ten times to make sure I didn't miss a single error; but there wasn't any.
I Can See Why You Like Writing Better Than Arts: ☠☠☠
I Can See Why You Like Writing Better Than Arts: ☠☠☠
This here blows the first impression off. If it wasn't for your description, I would totally turn the story down. The blending of the pictures wasn't as smooth and it wasn't exactly a feast for the eye also.
*YAAAWNNNN* Meter: ☠
*YAAAWNNNN* Meter: ☠
Hands down; I'm loving your story so much.
VERDICT: ☠☠/☠☠☠☠☠
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