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☛ REVIEW RUBRICS ☚
Your Story is Called What?!: [☠1-2; ☠☠ 3-4; ☠☠☠ 5-6 ; ☠☠☠☠ 7-8; ☠☠☠☠☠ 9-10]
aka: Title.
Mark-offs: not catchy, unoriginal, not relevant to the story line, and gramatically incorrect
Details: Titles are very important, they're the first thing that a reader will see, and the first thing they will judge.
So this Thing Right Here...That's a Description and a Foreword...? You've Got to be Kidding Me!
[☠1-2; ☠☠ 3-4; ☠☠☠ 5-6 ; ☠☠☠☠ 7-8; ☠☠☠☠☠ 9-10]
aka: Description/Foreword.
Mark offs: low effectiveness of your d/f to attract readers, wrong grammar/s, and horrible/bland presentation.
Details: This is another important thing in any fanfiction. This part basically contains the summary and an overview of your fic.
I'm Ready To Stab Your Characters Now: [☠1-2; ☠☠ 3-4; ☠☠☠ 5-6 ; ☠☠☠☠ 7-8; ☠☠☠☠☠ 9-10]
aka: Characterization.
Mark offs: using character profiles in your description/foreword, vague details, characters are not at all realistic, characters are boring, and OCs are just Mary Sues.
Details: Introducing your characters in your fic without using character profiles is a huge plus for this section.
Are You Sure You Know What You're Doing? [☠1-2; ☠☠ 3-4; ☠☠☠ 5-6 ; ☠☠☠☠ 7-8; ☠☠☠☠☠ 9-10]
aka: Plot.
Mark offs: too cliche story line, predictable twists, minimal turn of events, plot idea was not maximized, and basically...your plot just really .
Details: Basically the storyline of your fic. The twists you put in are important, was it too much of a cliche? Because everything's cliche, but if you used the right twists and the right characterization, then your fic is still definitely worth reading.
Better Stay In School and Listen to your English professor: [☠1-2; ☠☠ 3-4; ☠☠☠ 5-6 ; ☠☠☠☠ 7-8; ☠☠☠☠☠ 9-10]
aka: Spelling, Grammar, Context, and Usage.
Mark offs: not using proper tenses, wrong spelling, obviously not proof reading your chapters before you post it, improper context usage, redundancy, and wrong grammar.
Details: Self explanatory.
I Can See Why You Like Writing Better Than Arts: [☠1-2; ☠☠ 3-4; ☠☠☠ 5-6 ; ☠☠☠☠ 7-8; ☠☠☠☠☠ 9-10]
I Can See Why You Like Writing Better Than Arts: [☠1-2; ☠☠ 3-4; ☠☠☠ 5-6 ; ☠☠☠☠ 7-8; ☠☠☠☠☠ 9-10]
aka: Aesthetics.
Mark offs: clashing poster and background with your fic's theme, unreadable font, font size and color, bland overall appearance of your fic.
*YAAAWNNNN* Meter:
aka: Entertainment Value [☠1-2; ☠☠ 3-4; ☠☠☠ 5-6 ; ☠☠☠☠ 7-8; ☠☠☠☠☠ 9-10]
Mark offs: this varies from the reviewer's point of view.
Details: Is your story worth reading?
Are we going to rip it to bits? ...or not?
VERDICT: /☠☠☠☠☠
The skulls pertain to how many mark offs you have and how bad you are at that particular section.
Legend:
☠☠☠☠☠: Your story should be ripped.
☠☠☠☠: Yes, your story's not that...good
☠☠☠: 50/50.
☠☠: Try a little bit harder. You're almost there!
☠: Great! We love you!
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