[CONTENTID1]Dead Flowers Are Still Flowers[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]I'll be your island~[/CONTENTID2]

[CONTENTID3]

Title (5 points) 4/5- Very mysterious, I think it suited the message of the fic very well, I can understand the meaning in choosing the title in reference to what the fic is about. I think this is one of the most creative things about this work. 

Summary (10 points) 9/10 - The summary does not give much however it gives enough to tell you that this work is nothing happy, it suits the title and the direction that the plot is going in, despite it being vague but delivering the premise of this sad work, it also felt like it was missing something to me, I felt like it needed more, however, as the author you know what is best for you and your fic. I like the concept and the questions addressed in the summary as well. I personally have never lost anyone in this manner but despite thinking you're close to someone, thinking you're there for them, you cannot love their problems away and sometimes it isn't enough and sometimes you can be very late. So I really liked that part of the summary in that sense. 

Plot and cohesiveness (20 points) 19/20 - Okay so this plot while it is something that is used a lot within the fanfiction world for those who stir down those dark angsty parts that I tend to stay away from this fic in a way is very original. Now a lot of people might think that there is nothing original about a boy who kills himself blah blah. This isn't your typical bullied person deciding to commit suicide. It was the gang member, now there isn't much shown about why Baekhyun is the way he is considering that this isn't a completed fic. I can only make assumptions on why but I would not know until the aut