[CONTENTID1] Between Love and Infatuation[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Your indifferent face that I can figure out makes my breath stop~ [/CONTENTID2]

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Title: 5/5

I actually love your title a lot, mainly because there is a key difference between the two and I wanted to personally see how you were going to explore the characters reaction and how they would distinguish their feelings between the two. It makes me think of the choices that the characters would make in the pursuit of their own happiness. 

Description/Summary: 10/10

The description is a selling point of a fic and I believe your description was really well done, not only is it enticing, it is what would make readers either click chapter one or exit, however, your description is attention-grabbing. It captures conflict of interest, choices that each character would make it. It gives off a very slice of life vibe. 

Plot and Cohesiveness: 17/20

Well first off, you wrote about something dark, even though adultery is a popular trope in fanfiction, you went about it in a different light even though the premise is the same and somewhat cliche, it is very realistic. The flow of the chapters and the plot devices are very cohesive, it flows really well and I didn't really have any problems with pacing but this is only four chapters at most so there is not much to say about it yet. I commend that you try to keep the plot as realistic as you can since this story is rather mature and a very serious one at that. Adultery is something that hurts parties involved. No one wants to be cheated on even if the person is a piece of . :)