Harmful Temptation

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[CONTENTID1] Harmful Temptation[/CONTENTID1]


[CONTENTID2]Your lips upon my lips, your fingertips on my fingertips, your skin upon my skin would be the sweetest sin~ [/CONTENTID2]

[CONTENTID3]So I'm going to do this in a more old fashioned way, sorry this review is so late, I have a newborn baby that needs my love and attention. So I'll be doing this as a summary. 

I don't really have much to say but this is one of the best Jimin X seulgi fics I read

I loved this fic, the title really spoke volumes. It was dangerous path on both ends but attraction is a hell of a thing and temptation is not something that is easily fought. I thought the title really suited the fic. 

The summary was very hot, we got a glimpse of just how thick the tension and attraction between seulgi and Jimin is and boy was I not disappointed when I read the fic. The summary really sold the beauty of this work. 

As for the plot, I found it really enticing, now this genre is common but I always love reading it. The pacing of this is good not to slow and not too fast, it's so perfect, the way the author reveals backstories without having to wait 25 years and 16 chapters is a plus for an impatient reader like me. They don't reveal everything in one go which keeps the reader curious and anticipation for the next revelation. 

I found the characters really endearing and somewhat close to my heart in terms of how they dealt with their problems. I found

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Pingdwae
#1
Hi i requested a review <3
charlislekim
#2
Chapter 16: thank you the review! it's very nice hearing your thoughts so thank you!! and I will try to find my spelling error hehe!
and it's ok^^ but YOUR BABY? GASPPP
and have credited:))
AoifeCross
#3
I just requested for a review :)
charlislekim
#4
hello, I hope you're still taking in requests. Nonetheless, I submitted one. Thank you so much <3
fefedove
#5
Chapter 15: thank you for this review! i'm so glad you noticed some of the subtle things haha. i was worried that it would be *too subtle at times. i'm trying to figure out how to add more character thought since I realized that it's a problem, so thanks for pointing it out. the review was helpful and i'll credit now ^_^
fefedove
#6
i've submitted a request via google ^_^
fefedove
#7
heya~ is this shop still open?
kamski
#8
Chapter 14: Wow, a perfect score! I didn't expect this, thank you so much for your review, it was very nice to see what you thought of the fic. I was originally really hesitant to approach such a serious topic matter, and I didn't want to make it too heavy and to read your comments on the fic really helped with those worries. Thank you so much again for the review, I'm super glad you enjoyed the fic! I've picked up and credited!
kamski
#9
I have sent in a request via Google forms!
jaxial
#10
Chapter 12: Gosh thanks! This is so much better than the last review I got from you I'm glad I improved lol
I'll credit you soon, Thanks again!