[CONTENTID1] Illegal[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2] That dimple is illegal, your existence alone is illegal~ [/CONTENTID2]

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Title: 5/5 

Personally, I believed the title of the fic suited the overall mood of the story, considering that the story is centered around illegal street racing and the thrills and chills of danger of doing something illegal. I won't talk more about how the title fits the plot here, I'll mention more of it in plot. 

Summary: 9/10

Okay, so I found the summary actually did a great job in introducing a little of Taehyung's background even though its like inquistive not giving any clear answers; to me it showed that Taehyung has his own reasons for doing this. A past, what that past is, readers will have to find out by giving the fic a chance. I found it compelling and mysterious. You tagged the fic as accurately as possible, you didn't include any spoilers nor did you leave out any triggering tags, so props for that also. 

Plot and Cohesiveness: 18/20

This was just a one shot and it was quite well done. This wasn't the first street racing fic I read but I loved the take you did, I particularily loved all of Jeongguk's siblings and his reasons for street racing, there is just something so lovely about Jungkook trying to have his priorities in check and be responsible. The pacing wasn't too fast nor too slow, we are introduced briefly to little of each character's background and little interaction before anything happens. The development of the relationship was also really well done despite it being fwb to lovers? I don't know if that was the best way to describe it but that's how I saw it. 

What I liked most about this plot was how dynamic it was, you portrayed street racing in light that made me feel as if I was in the car during the races, everyone's background was relatable like you could get a gist of their reasoning even if it wasn't something you agreed with. There wasn't anything I disli