[CONTENTID1]My One and Only Obsession[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]You hurt me so bad so bad~ [/CONTENTID2]

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Title: 5/5

Not only was it suited for the fic, it signifies a lot of Chanyeol's feelings towards the beginning. It shows his obsession with wanting all of Baekhyun to himself. I actually really liked the title.

Summary: 7/10

So basically the summary was only one line that didn't give many details of anything. It wasn't extremely captivating but it showed just how deep and dark this fic is.  The tags were used correctly in how it showed elements that were within the fic and was briefly mentioned in the foreward. It did a great job of introducing the main plot line that in fact, Baekyun was Chanyeol's only obsession.

Plot: 17/20

To be honest, I was not the biggest fan of the plot, it's cliche and some parts but I guess in the end it shows that maybe a purpose could change. I'm not about abusive fics I was so skeptical to read this but I went through with it anyway. The pacing of the fic was good, it wasn't slow nor was it too fast. You gave your plot enough time to explore the dynamics of the characters as well as their background, how they got together, how they stayed together and etc. I liked that you weren't afraid to portray the dark side of genres, at times it may seem inaccurate to me but then again what's the accurate way to write fics under this genre? You plot was consistent in each chapter and thus the flow was really well done, it wasn't confusing to me or anything.