Da Capo (Fairylights)
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Title: The title is amazing and actually incoporates the meaning of the fic, you don't really see how it makes any sense until you get towards the end. It is the best way to describe the character's relationship without really seeing anything much. I loved how cohesivess that wa, tied together like a bow on a christmas present. Good job. 5/5
Summary: There's not much going on in the summary, pretty short and sweet much like the fic, there isn't much that needs to be explained without selling out the story plot but still enough to captivate you into reading it. 10/10
Plot: The plot is creative though a little fast paced so it can be easy to get lost in it. Sometimes there's no connecting piece so you can easily be like "wait, what happened there?" However, that doesn't make the story terrible, the plot is really fluffy and cute. I loved the way you painted each scene with rich description and yet it was simple and beautiful almost poetic. The plot is very slice of life which is my favorite genre of fiction. 16/20
Character development: There isn't that much character development going on but there is still enough for you to notice, this is particularly with Minhyuk who started off as the standoffish author. He's in love with someone that he can't have and amazingly enough, with a li
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