Da Capo (Fairylights)

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[CONTENTID1]Da Capo (Fairylights)[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Peek-a-boo, we can play until the moon reaches the jungle gym[/CONTENTID2]

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Title: The title is amazing and actually incoporates the meaning of the fic, you don't really see how it makes any sense until you get towards the end. It is the best way to describe the character's relationship without really seeing anything much. I loved how cohesivess that wa, tied together like a bow on a christmas present. Good job. 5/5

Summary: There's not much going on in the summary, pretty short and sweet much like the fic, there isn't much that needs to be explained without selling out the story plot but still enough to captivate you into reading it. 10/10

Plot: The plot is creative though a little fast paced so it can be easy to get lost in it. Sometimes there's no connecting piece so you can easily be like "wait, what happened there?" However, that doesn't make the story terrible, the plot is really fluffy and cute. I loved the way you painted each scene with rich description and yet it was simple and beautiful almost poetic. The plot is very slice of life which is my favorite genre of fiction. 16/20

Character development: There isn't that much character development going on but there is still enough for you to notice, this is particularly with Minhyuk who started off as the standoffish author. He's in love with someone that he can't have and amazingly enough, with a li

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Pingdwae
#1
Hi i requested a review <3
charlislekim
#2
Chapter 16: thank you the review! it's very nice hearing your thoughts so thank you!! and I will try to find my spelling error hehe!
and it's ok^^ but YOUR BABY? GASPPP
and have credited:))
AoifeCross
#3
I just requested for a review :)
charlislekim
#4
hello, I hope you're still taking in requests. Nonetheless, I submitted one. Thank you so much <3
fefedove
#5
Chapter 15: thank you for this review! i'm so glad you noticed some of the subtle things haha. i was worried that it would be *too subtle at times. i'm trying to figure out how to add more character thought since I realized that it's a problem, so thanks for pointing it out. the review was helpful and i'll credit now ^_^
fefedove
#6
i've submitted a request via google ^_^
fefedove
#7
heya~ is this shop still open?
kamski
#8
Chapter 14: Wow, a perfect score! I didn't expect this, thank you so much for your review, it was very nice to see what you thought of the fic. I was originally really hesitant to approach such a serious topic matter, and I didn't want to make it too heavy and to read your comments on the fic really helped with those worries. Thank you so much again for the review, I'm super glad you enjoyed the fic! I've picked up and credited!
kamski
#9
I have sent in a request via Google forms!
jaxial
#10
Chapter 12: Gosh thanks! This is so much better than the last review I got from you I'm glad I improved lol
I'll credit you soon, Thanks again!