At the edge of the world

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[CONTENTID1]At the edge of the world [/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]I will love you til kingdom comes[/CONTENTID2]

[CONTENTID3]

Title: 5/5

The title is really amazing due to the context of the work and if it's exactly what I think then, author you are truly poetic. No matter what both Donghae and Hyukjae will follow each other to the edge of the earth if they have too, it means that they will meet each other. *Feels*

Summary: 10/10

Not much going on in the description but it's enough to know that this fic shows no matter how long and how far you go, if you're really meant to be you will be. That feeling of meeting a lover you haven't seen in months, it's truly the closest to heaven you can be. 

Plot: 20/20

The plot is simply beautiful. It's just two carefully maintaining a relationship that was outted. Their love for each other is strong even they themselves is strong but I'll speak about this in character development. Even though it was explicitly detailed, your work shows the dark side of working in kpop industry and having a relationship that was made public. For straight couple, it's a huge blow to your career but for gays, I can't even imagine. Your fic really showed how realistic it is and how terrible the consequences are for one's career. It's such a risk, I love that despite all, they never gave up.

Character development: 20/20

I won't separate it into donghae and eunhyuk but instead talk a

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Pingdwae
#1
Hi i requested a review <3
charlislekim
#2
Chapter 16: thank you the review! it's very nice hearing your thoughts so thank you!! and I will try to find my spelling error hehe!
and it's ok^^ but YOUR BABY? GASPPP
and have credited:))
AoifeCross
#3
I just requested for a review :)
charlislekim
#4
hello, I hope you're still taking in requests. Nonetheless, I submitted one. Thank you so much <3
fefedove
#5
Chapter 15: thank you for this review! i'm so glad you noticed some of the subtle things haha. i was worried that it would be *too subtle at times. i'm trying to figure out how to add more character thought since I realized that it's a problem, so thanks for pointing it out. the review was helpful and i'll credit now ^_^
fefedove
#6
i've submitted a request via google ^_^
fefedove
#7
heya~ is this shop still open?
kamski
#8
Chapter 14: Wow, a perfect score! I didn't expect this, thank you so much for your review, it was very nice to see what you thought of the fic. I was originally really hesitant to approach such a serious topic matter, and I didn't want to make it too heavy and to read your comments on the fic really helped with those worries. Thank you so much again for the review, I'm super glad you enjoyed the fic! I've picked up and credited!
kamski
#9
I have sent in a request via Google forms!
jaxial
#10
Chapter 12: Gosh thanks! This is so much better than the last review I got from you I'm glad I improved lol
I'll credit you soon, Thanks again!