[CONTENTID1]Way Back Home [/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Don't want new, I want you~ [/CONTENTID2]

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Title: 5/5
Way Back Home - suiting title as it the fic speaks about a distant friend and waiting for them to return. Also, the poster is truly breathtakingly beautiful.

Summary: 9.5/10
The description was rather short, not much to say. It gives the gist of exactly what the fic would entail.

Plot: 17/20
Long distance friendship but not exactly seeing that she only went away briefly for an exchange program but none the less the fic tackled the topic of waiting for the friend to return.

You asked what you can use to give the story that extra flavor, what it was missing. I'd highlight below and in the character development.

The plot could have shown more of how waiting feels, the loneliness, the waiting, the feeling of excitement to call or waiting for the call.

Character development: 17/20
Jaehyun: We see briefly into his life but not much. I think you can highlight more of how he goes about his days with Hyejong there, how does he feel about it? Does he miss her like crazy? How does he reread all messages when she's sleeping and he's awake? Is he anxious about the phone calls?

Hyejong: How does she cope with being away from home? Does she miss Korea? Does she miss Jaehyun? Is she always expecting a text when she wakes up? Does she count the days before she can return to him?