Forever, we are young

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[CONTENTID1]Forever, we are young [/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2] All of this seems like a dream, don't try to disappear~[/CONTENTID2]

[CONTENTID3]Announcement: This review was written on my phone and I really had no time to format this review I will try my best to fix it on my laptop later, also SPOILERS BELOW.

Title: I loved the title of this fic, something about it really hit me in the feels, like it just felt that no matter what they went through they would always be young, always be friends, always be a family.

Summary: The summary really didnt give away much of the plot or the characters, its really angsty shows the fic in a much more mature light than it is. However the summary did a really good job of setting up the story, there's nothing missing or feels short of what you really wanted, its really enticing and beautiful.

Plot: I found the plot so beautiful, a lot of the angst was subtle so unless you read between the lines or pay close attention to whats happening you wont even notice it. A good example of this is the scene with Taehyung and the dog that was given to him when Jongup died. I loved how well friendships were portrayed in this fic, you can see how much they cared about each other without needing the romantic aspects of it. The slice of life was so well done, in fact you captured how tiring and unfair the world is. You captured the story and experiences of Mao Buyi and Zhao Tianyu really well.

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Pingdwae
#1
Hi i requested a review <3
charlislekim
#2
Chapter 16: thank you the review! it's very nice hearing your thoughts so thank you!! and I will try to find my spelling error hehe!
and it's ok^^ but YOUR BABY? GASPPP
and have credited:))
AoifeCross
#3
I just requested for a review :)
charlislekim
#4
hello, I hope you're still taking in requests. Nonetheless, I submitted one. Thank you so much <3
fefedove
#5
Chapter 15: thank you for this review! i'm so glad you noticed some of the subtle things haha. i was worried that it would be *too subtle at times. i'm trying to figure out how to add more character thought since I realized that it's a problem, so thanks for pointing it out. the review was helpful and i'll credit now ^_^
fefedove
#6
i've submitted a request via google ^_^
fefedove
#7
heya~ is this shop still open?
kamski
#8
Chapter 14: Wow, a perfect score! I didn't expect this, thank you so much for your review, it was very nice to see what you thought of the fic. I was originally really hesitant to approach such a serious topic matter, and I didn't want to make it too heavy and to read your comments on the fic really helped with those worries. Thank you so much again for the review, I'm super glad you enjoyed the fic! I've picked up and credited!
kamski
#9
I have sent in a request via Google forms!
jaxial
#10
Chapter 12: Gosh thanks! This is so much better than the last review I got from you I'm glad I improved lol
I'll credit you soon, Thanks again!