Tainted
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[CONTENTID2]A story that hasn't ended yet it's been left all empty~ [/CONTENTID2]
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Title: 5/5
So the title suited the fic more than I thought it would, it's a strong title, not much else to say, to be honest.
Summary: 8.5/10
Short and concise, it's more than enough to grab a reader's attention, intriguing them to read more of the story to know exactly what happens. I would recommend you add trigger warnings for some of the scenes, I know you tagged gore but as such persons must know what they are getting into when reading this fic, the scene and the murdering of the servant girl wasn't something I was expecting. Even though it wasn't that explicit. You still need to state that the fic has triggering events.
Plot cohesiveness: 15/20
Though I'm someone who is like in love with mythical stories, be it Greek, Japanese or Chinese. I liked the direction the fic was heading in however the plot was also overly cliche but there was some originality in it, letting jungkook be the one who is actually the crown prince. I liked the idea of the fic a lot.
Character development: 14/20
Taehyung: to be rather honest I hated Taehyung's character straight until the end, no amount of character development could have made me like him. This is due to the fact that he did acts of stuff that unforgettable, Jungkook, using him, claiming dominance over him. To top it off he even kil
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