Tainted

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[CONTENTID1]Tainted[/CONTENTID1]
[CONTENTID2]A story that hasn't ended yet it's been left all empty~ [/CONTENTID2]
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Title: 5/5
So the title suited the fic more than I thought it would, it's a strong title, not much else to say, to be honest. 

Summary: 8.5/10
Short and concise, it's more than enough to grab a reader's attention, intriguing them to read more of the story to know exactly what happens. I would recommend you add trigger warnings for some of the scenes, I know you tagged gore but as such persons must know what they are getting into when reading this fic, the scene and the murdering of the servant girl wasn't something I was expecting. Even though it wasn't that explicit. You still need to state that the fic has triggering events.  

Plot cohesiveness: 15/20
Though I'm someone who is like in love with mythical stories, be it Greek, Japanese or Chinese. I liked the direction the fic was heading in however the plot was also overly cliche but there was some originality in it, letting jungkook be the one who is actually the crown prince. I liked the idea of the fic a lot. 
 
Character development: 14/20
Taehyung: to be rather honest I hated Taehyung's character straight until the end, no amount of character development could have made me like him. This is due to the fact that he did acts of stuff that unforgettable, Jungkook, using him, claiming dominance over him. To top it off he even kil

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Pingdwae
#1
Hi i requested a review <3
charlislekim
#2
Chapter 16: thank you the review! it's very nice hearing your thoughts so thank you!! and I will try to find my spelling error hehe!
and it's ok^^ but YOUR BABY? GASPPP
and have credited:))
AoifeCross
#3
I just requested for a review :)
charlislekim
#4
hello, I hope you're still taking in requests. Nonetheless, I submitted one. Thank you so much <3
fefedove
#5
Chapter 15: thank you for this review! i'm so glad you noticed some of the subtle things haha. i was worried that it would be *too subtle at times. i'm trying to figure out how to add more character thought since I realized that it's a problem, so thanks for pointing it out. the review was helpful and i'll credit now ^_^
fefedove
#6
i've submitted a request via google ^_^
fefedove
#7
heya~ is this shop still open?
kamski
#8
Chapter 14: Wow, a perfect score! I didn't expect this, thank you so much for your review, it was very nice to see what you thought of the fic. I was originally really hesitant to approach such a serious topic matter, and I didn't want to make it too heavy and to read your comments on the fic really helped with those worries. Thank you so much again for the review, I'm super glad you enjoyed the fic! I've picked up and credited!
kamski
#9
I have sent in a request via Google forms!
jaxial
#10
Chapter 12: Gosh thanks! This is so much better than the last review I got from you I'm glad I improved lol
I'll credit you soon, Thanks again!