[CONTENTID1] Time and Tide [/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]She's my black pearl~[/CONTENTID2]

[CONTENTID3]

Title: 5/5

The title and the poster suited each other very well. It adds a lot to the fic as it sets both the mood and tone of the story. I don't usually comment on posters but this was so well done that I couldn't ignore it.

Summary: 10/10

Really well done, I thought the description was almost like the beginning of an ominous fairy tale, the one's grandparents tell their grandchild to keep them from misbehaving. A little dark but it's so well structured and detailed yet it is still mysterious.


Plot: 20/20
The plot follows Baekhyun as a pirate who is both searching for a jewel that grants wishes and searching for a jewel that grants wishes and to be known as the Lord of the Seas. I'm not one that has read many pirate fics, this could be my second or third but none has went in the direction that you are going in. It's very original to me, I could not guess the plot half way through the chapter or anything like that. There are times when I'm wondering is this foreshadowing or not? Lol overall the plot so far stays consistent, no plot holes or loops or straying which is good.

Character development: 19.5/20

Baekhyun -
A pirate and a captain of a ghost ship. Baekhyun, I can never tell what he thinks, I know he's in search of Vida for his brother now it seems like it's due to his guilt for getting