[CONTENTID1]You Had Me At Hello [/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]You suddenly came into my life, putting me in danger bewitching me~[/CONTENTID2]

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Title 5/5 - From the title alone, you know that this fic is going to be a romantic comedy. The title is fun, it reminds me so much of how  love at first sight happens, sometimes you only need to see someone and sometimes you just need one word to completely go under. That being said it was only the word "hello" that led to the weekend of a lifetime for jongin. Excellent use of title and plot compatibility.

Summary 10/10- The foreward layout is simply brilliant and artistic, it's the first time I've seen a story's foreward so artistically done. The plot summary is very straightforward, it sums up exactly what you're going to get in this fic and there's no straying from the plot. 

Plot cohesiveness 19/20- From the beginning to end, the plot stays through to the summary, you have a teenage mechanic absolutely done with his summer job and he just wants rest, relaxation and a bucket of chicken and what does he get? Another teenage running from the police and a weekend together in providence outside of Seoul alongside with a not-so-date date and a horrible introduction to meet my parents. So this is all a recipe for a romantic comedy. Which is exactly what this light-hearted story is about, I laughed at all the funny scenes and just the wording of Jongin's thoughts "now he wishes to swerve over to a cliff and drown the motherer" I mean violence is never the answer but comedy is. The pacing of the story is fine, considering it is a oneshot, there aren't any filler moments, I believe each scene was used perfectly. 
Overall, the plot stays true and true til the end, even with the adventures that probably won't happen realistically to anyone but I'm sure there could be one lucky person out there