[CONTENTID1]Intersomnia[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]I can't sleep without you even if my eyes are closed~[/CONTENTID2]

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Title:n 5/5

Matched the fic to utmost perfection, nothing much to say really. Perfectly, well done.

Summary 9/10

The description much like the rest of the work is short, it's interesting and attention-grabbing. I think the graphics in the page attracts readers towards the work also. The prompts and songs mentioned in the summary matched really well. There really wasn't anything much I was expecting from the summary, it was pretty much standard. 

Plot 18/20

This plot was actually lighter than I thought it was. Initially, the story begins a bit melancholy as Yeri portrays her backstory, her reasonings, and her final decisions. Next, we are introduced to Johnny, we have a glimpse of who he is, his thoughts and emotions as well as his history. Eventually, our main protagonists meet and despite the little confusion of what is going on, the fic has an extreme feeling of peacefulness during the scene of them speaking in the meadow.  Johnny asked her reason for jumping but the overall mood of the chapter hadn't changed despite the painful backstory. I felt yeri's comfort. 

I do feel like there should have been a little more detail because despite the plot having consistency and cohesiveness, it falls short and delivering more answers to the plot, more personality traits, and character development. Also, the ending was truly abrupt, it gave the characters closure, however, it didn't explain much. I also liked how the fic addresses t