[CONTENTID1]Under The Blue Hill Review[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Don't doubt me, babe, you make me want to change~[/CONTENTID2]

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Title (5 points) - 4/5: I personally loved the title however since the fic isn't completed yet, I cannot say how it will relate to the fic once more of the plot would be revealed. 

Summary (10 points) 8/10 - The summary is very intriguing, it made me want to know what has happened to Kyungsoo and how will he let go of what happened to move on with his life, where this fic would go in the future?
 
Plot and cohesiveness (20 points) 15/20 - Since this plot has yet to be finished, I cannot tell how cohesive the plot development have been but so far, everything seems to be sticking to the way it shows in the summary. The pacing of this fic is not to slow not to fast maybe because we are still only at the beginning of the fic.
I found this to be a little cliche a teacher/student fic, I haven't read a Kyungsoo x OC fic so this is my first time I have ever read one. I had no idea what I was expecting to read when I came across this work but however, it was not bad despite the overused plot. I am not sure how realistic you were going for when writing but I found it a little hard to believe the things that are just getting off the hook within the fic. 

Character Development (20 points) 15/20- Do Kyungsoo, he was once a happy person who seems to have everything going for him until he suddenly changed, despite reading I am not