Chapter 16

Bow That Playboy

    The next morning,Jihoon and Seungcheol wake up late so they ate breakfast and lunch together.

Seungcheol:I love you(kiss her cheek)

Jihoon:I love you too…(smile)

Seungcheol:What do you want to do today?

Jihoon:Anything as long youre here with me.

Seungcheol:Since,when my wife being this romantic,huh.

Jihoon:Since I love this cheesy man name Choi Seungcheol.

A few months later, Seungcheol has to go outstation at China, so he has to leave his wife at The Lee’s.

Jihoon: Do you have to go?

Seungcheol: I’m sorry, love. I wish I can ask someone else to do it but I can’t. I will bought you something for you, ok.

Jihoon: Be careful. Call me every day.

Seungcheol: Yes, my dear. (Kiss her lips)

Jihoon: love you, Oppa.

Seungcheol: Love you too. Got to go, Take care.

After 2days Seungcheol went outstation, Wonwoo decide to visit her twin. As she went in, she is welcome with someone vomit.

Wonwoo: Hoonie…

Jihoon: In the toilet, Wonnie.

Wonwoo: Hoonie, What happened?

Jihoon: I don’t know, this morning I got a headache and always vomit, Wonnie.

Wonwoo: Let me brought you to the clinic, Hoonie.

Jihoon: Alright…

At the hospital, they decided to ask Seohyun to check Jihoon. After she check her,

Wonwoo: So Seohyun unnie how’s Jihoon?

Seohyun: Jihoon-ah, have you extra work at café again?

Jihoon: Just a week, I’m sorry.

Seohyun: It’s ok, I know you, Jihoon. You just need more rest from now on.

Jihoon: Yes, unnie.

Seohyun: I will also give you some vitamins for the baby too...

Wonwoo: What!!

Seohyun: Congratulation, Jihoon-ah. You’re pregnant for 8 weeks now.

Jihoon: Unnie, Seriously. I…I’m …pregnant?

Seohyun: Yes, my dear. You’re going to be a mother soon.

Wonwoo: at last. We should tell the others..

Seohyun: Wonwoo-ah, you too should be careful. You also pregnant too right.

Wonwoo: I’m to excite that I forget about it.

Jihoon: Thanks, Unnie.

Seohyun: Anything, Jihoon. Be careful, you’re still in early stage.

Jihoon: I remember that.

After that, they went back to their house

Wonwoo: I already told Uee unnie, that you take a short break.

Jihoon: Yah! I should the one to tell them not you.

Wonwoo: Hey, when I’m like you, you’re the one who told them.

Jihoon: Woonie, Please don’t tell Seungcheol Oppa, yet.

Wonwoo: About that don’t worry and I already tell Mingyu Oppa don’t tell him also.

Jihoon: Wonnie, I’m craving for Jajangmyeon. Can we go eat now?

Wonwoo: Sure, I’m also craving for Chinese food too.

A week has passed; Seungcheol and Mingyu arrive at the airport. They went home to see their lovely wife.

Seungcheol: Jihoon-ah…I’m home

Jihoon: Oppa… (Hug him)

Seungcheol: How are you my dear?

Jihoon: I’m fine, Oppa. Did you bring something for me?

Seungcheol: Uhm…about that, I’m sorry. I don’t buy anything from there.

Jihoon: But you promise me that you buy something there. (Sulk)

Seungcheol: I’m sorry. I’m a bit busy and we didn’t manage to buy anything.

Jihoon: I… hate… you… (Sulk)

Jihoon went to their room, Seungcheol follow…

Seungcheol: Hey, I’m sorry.

Jihoon: You don’t keep your promise. (cry)

Seungcheol: I’m sorry.

Jihoon: You don’t love me. You also don’t love the baby too…

Seungcheol: … What?

Jihoon: I’m pregnant, you idiot…

Seungcheol: Seriously?

Jihoon: Yeah, I’ve got morning sickness 2days after you left. (cry)

Seungcheol: Why don’t you tell me when we are video call? (hug her)

Jihoon: Just want to surprise you.

Seungcheol: I love it. How many months now? (Kiss her cheek)

Jihoon: 2months, now. I still hate you, you know. (Sulk)

Seungcheol: What, I thought you forget about it, already.

Jihoon: I’m kind of craving for Pizza, Oppa.

Seungcheol: Come; let’s go to Pizza parlor now.

   Jihoon and Seungcheol went to the pizza parlor and order a set of large size Hawaiian Chicken Pizza and a regular size cheese pizza. It’s kind of shock for Seungcheol that Jihoon had this big appetite.

Seungcheol: Are you sure, you can finish this pizza?

Jihoon: I’m not alone to eat this. This is for the three of us, you, me and the baby.

Seungcheol: I appreciate that baby because he makes you eat more.

Jihoon: Why?

Seungcheol: I always worry about your appetite, you know.

Jihoon: Sorry, Oppa.

Seungcheol: I have something to give you.

Jihoon: What is it?

Seungcheol: Here (gave a box).Open it…

Inside the box is a pair necklace that has letter S and J.

Seungcheol: You like it?

Jihoon: It’s beautiful, Oppa.

Seungcheol: I was just joking to you about I forget to buy something for you there.

Jihoon: Thank you, Oppa. I love it…

Seungcheol: anything for you, my dear.

They arrive home and see someone in front of their house, it was Wonho. Seungcheol went out while Jihoon stay inside of the car.

Wonho: Where’s my favorite girl, Jihoon.

Seungcheol: What are you doing here, Wonho?

Wonho: I’m going to take back what I suppose to have.

Seungcheol: You will not take Jihoon from me.

Wonho: Relax, Seungcheol. I will make you gave Jihoon to me.

Seungcheol: By, What? (smirk)

Wonho: By gave some pictures of you and I know she will never going to believe you.

Seungcheol: What are you talking about?

Wonho: You know what I mean, right. You and Siyeon are still contact each other, I heard Jihoon didn’t know her.

Then, Suddenly, …

Shownu: Stop already Wonho.

Wonho: What are you doing, here?

Shownu: Jihoon message me that you here.

Wonho: Why everyone against me and not him.

Shownu: That is because you are stupid and everybody knows you just want the money only.

Wonho: You, shut up. (Left the place)

Seungcheol drive his car inside the garage and went out the car with Jihoon.

Seungcheol: Thanks, Shownu for the help.

Shownu: anything, sorry for Wonho.

Jihoon: Is he ok, Oppa?

Shownu: He just got accident and run away from the hospital.

Jihoon: Oh my…

Shownu: Don’t worry, I know where he going then. He will go inside the jail tomorrow.

Seungcheol: Why?

Shownu: Apparently, he kills his brother Hyungwoo and many girls include Doyoon and SinB. But thank goodness they both got runaway fast. Ah, you too right Jihoon?

Jihoon: Yeah, but good thing Seungcheol Oppa come right on time…

Seungcheol: Tell me everything ok.

Shownu: Sure. Oh, Congratulation for both of you. Heard the news.

Jihoon: Thanks Oppa.

Shownu: Well, I better be going then, bye.

The next day, Shownu call Seungcheol that Wonho just got caught drug addict and was sent to the jail and got a heavy punishment.

    A few months later, Jihoon just gave birth to a healthy baby boy, 3.2 kg. Wonwoo also got a baby boy 3.0 kg 3 months before Jihoon. At the hospital...

Seungcheol: Thanks, love. He is cute just like you. (kiss her forehead)

Jihoon: Anything for you. What are we going to name him?

Seungcheol: I let you decide.

Jihoon: Choi Seunghoon...

Seungcheol: Combine our names.

Jihoon: Yeah… Is it ok?

Seungcheol: It’s beautiful.

The nurse come to give the baby and left…Seungcheol pick the baby up and gave it to Jihoon…

Jihoon: Why you’re so cute.

Seungcheol: Seunghoon-ah…Mummy and Daddy love you, Seunghoon-ah (kiss his cheek)

Jihoon: I guess he needs to take his milk first.

Seungcheol: I watch…

Jihoon: Stop it, will you..

Seungcheol: Awww… You’re cute. (kiss her lips)

That evening, many of their friends and family come to visit them.

Mrs. Jeonghan: Oh my, Look at him, he like Jihoon.

Mrs.Seungkwan: I agree with you, unnie.

Mr. Hansol: Its look like I don’t need to worry about your mum nag at me that she want a grandchild.

Mr. Jisoo: You, too. I thought Jeonghan alone wail at me and good thing Wonwoo gave her first.

   Mrs. Jeonghan & Mrs.Seungkwan just blush. They all happy with the baby. They already went back home after 3 days at the hospital.

Jihoon: Oppa, Can you get me a diaper, please.

Seungcheol: Coming. Let’s go Seunghoonnie to the bathroom.

Jihoon: Oppa be careful, ok.

Seungcheol: Don’t worry, dear. I know what I’m doing.

Jihoon: If you said so, I ‘m going to make us lunch before Wonwoo and Mingyu arrive.

Jihoon and Seungcheol take turn on taking care of Choi Seunghoon. Jihoon is in charge of the food, drink and clothes while Seungcheol is in charge playing and bathing the little one. It’s easy for them since they both even busy with work but they will spare time together with Seunghoon. Choi Seunghoon is now 4months old; he likes listen to music with mummy and play with daddy.

Seungcheol: Jihoon, Where is Hoonie’s clothes?

Jihoon: On the bed at our room.

    Today, Mingyu and Wonwoo are coming with Kim Minwoo, the 7months old baby. It’s been long enough they didn’t meet since the babies come to their lives. Chan who very exciting getting 2nephew, he always miss them, the same for Joohyun, she just got marry to Aaron and is waiting for their graduation. She always video call Jihoon just to see her favorite nephew.

Wonwoo: Unnie, we’re here..

Jihoon: Ah, Wonwoo-ah, I’m in the kitchen. Oppa, they have arrived.

Seungcheol: Coming. (carry Seunghoon). Sorry just got Seunghoon to bath…

Mingyu: It’s ok, hyung. Hey there Seunghoonnie.

Wonwoo: Unnie, What are you cooking? Can I help?

Jihoon: Spahagetti Carbonara, Grilled Chicken, Sandwiches and Ice Lemon Tea.

Wonwoo: My, that’s a lot.

Jihoon: It’s nothing. I know you like it. Can you make the Ice Lemon Tea please? All the food almost had done except that one.

Wonwoo: Sure, I also brought fruits.

Jihoon: How’s Minwoo doing?

Wonwoo: His ok, but it’s hard because he like to stick with Mingyu.

Jihoon: Wow, daddy boy.

Wonwoo: He will sleep when Mingyu make him sleep, but good thing that when he went to work, Minwoo didn’t react. How about Seunghoon?

Jihoon: He closes to me more than Seungcheol. But when Seungcheol come to play with him, he will stick with him like glue.

Wonwoo: Hoonie Heard that Chan got a girlfriend. Is it true?

Jihoon: He does tell me that he saw a girl he adore but don’t really know. And also he asks some advice from Seungcheol and Mingyu too...

Wonwoo: Seriously, Wow.

Jihoon: ah, don’t forget, Hanbin Oppa and Hyunsik Oppa.

Wonwoo: I guess he so really need help about it.

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     Today, the family flies to Japan for Jihoon’s graduation. They also fly with Soonyoung and Seokmin with their 2kids, Minyoung and Sungmin. Jihoon and Seokmin are inside their room because they have practice for the day; sadly they have to separate with their family.

Seokmin: Jihoon unnie, I can’t believe we graduate.

Jihoon: I know right. I was so nervous thought I don’t get to grad.

Seokmin: Want to go around the university?

Jihoon: Let’s go now.

   Jihoon and Seokmin went around the university to find their memory back when they still a student. They laugh when they remind it, they stop at a lake where they always went jogging during evening.

Jihoon: hey, do you remember when we caught Joy unnie with Sungjae Oppa.

Seokmin: I remember they were running when they got caught by us when they were having a picnic.

Jihoon: It’s been long time we didn’t come here, right.

Seokmin: I know right, last time we are here we are still study and now we already have our own family.

Jihoon: Time fly by fast. Let’s go it’s getting late.

Seokmin: Unnie, I brought some food want the share?

Jihoon: Sure. I’m kind of hungry.

That night, Jihoon video call with Seungcheol…

Jihoon: hey there.

Seungcheol: How are you?

Jihoon: I’m fine, just got back from lake with Seokmin.

Seungcheol: I see…

Jihoon: I will show you some places at the university that I always went I’m still study here.

Seungcheol: You know what.

Jihoon: What?

Seungcheol: I feel like I’m dating a university student now.

Jihoon: Yeah right. How’s Seunghoonnie doing?

Seungcheol: His well behave except it’s a bit hard to make him sleep since you’re the only one who can make him sleep.

Jihoon: So he still awake..

Seungcheol: Nope, had to ask Omma and Mum to sing him a song.

Jihoon: Really, Wow…

Seungcheol: Have you eaten yet?

Jihoon: Yeah, I ate Kimbap, Sausage bread, Fried Rice and Orange juice.

Seungcheol: That’s a lot you eat.

Jihoon: Seokmin brought Kimbap, well we still hungry so we brought fried rice at the cafeteria here.

Seungcheol: It’s getting late; don’t want you to wake up late for your big day.

Jihoon: You right. Good night and I love you, Choi Seungcheol.

Seungcheol: Good night and love you too Choi Jihoon.

Jihoon fell asleep after video call with Seungcheol. The next day, Seokmin wake Jihoon up to prepare for their graduation day. They went straight to the hall where the event held. They sat separately according to their names. When it was time for them, they stand and went to the stage to accept the scroll. After the event done, they hug each other and cry.

Jihoon: Congratulation, Seokmin-ah. We did it…

Seokmin: Congratulation to you too, Unnie. I barely got this if it wasn’t for you.

Jihoon: We survive for three years each other. Thanks Seokmin...

Seokmin: Hey, we did it right.

While they were hug each other, their husband saw them.

Soonyoung: Ok, enough with the hugging. Seungcheol and I are getting jealous here…

Seokmin: Shut up Oppa. You ruin our moment…

Soonyoung: Whatever, Anyway Congrats my dear wife and to my dear bestfriend, Jihoon.

Jihoon: Thanks Soonyoung.(smile)

Seungcheol: We should celebrate after this…

Soonyoung: Good idea…

Seokmin: Where are the others?

Seungcheol: at the tent eating…

Jihoon: Oh, I’m hungry. My stomach can’t stop growling inside there.

Seungcheol: Let’s go then.

They went separately with their partner while intertwine their finger.

Seungcheol: Congratulation, my beautiful wife.(kiss her lips)

Jihoon: thanks, Oppa. (kiss his cheek)

Seungcheol: Want to go somewhere?

Jihoon: You just want to have a date with me, right.

Seungcheol: Just want to see what place went my wife study before…

Jihoon: Sure, Come, I show you around.

Seungcheol and Jihoon went around the university while Jihoon told what memory she had at the place. They arrive at the lake where yesterday Jihoon and Seokmin went.

Seungcheol: Is this the lake you went yesterday?

Jihoon: Yeah

Seungcheol: it’s peaceful here.

Jihoon: Seokmin and I always jog here and sometimes we stress a bit because there are too many couples here.

Seungcheol: Do you have someone before?

Jihoon: Well, there is someone, but I reject him because I heard that he just want to have with me only.

Seungcheol: Good girl.

Jihoon: That’s why I hate playboys. Because it only remind me to him.

Seungcheol: Do you hate me then?

Jihoon: I do hate you before because you want to sleep with me, but now I love you.(kiss his lips)

Seungcheol: I’m sorry for my behavior before. I’ve being playboy when I’m still study at overseas.

Jihoon: it’s ok, Oppa. That was your past. Now, you’re not that kind of person right. You are only loyal to me.

Seungcheol: That’s why I love you, Jihoon. Always there for me no matter what.

Jihoon: You know what Oppa….

Seungcheol: What?

Jihoon: I had bowed a playboy who is now my husband.

Seungcheol: And that playboy lucky to have you as his wife. (kiss her lips)

Jihoon: Oppa we are at university. Some student will see us.

Seungcheol: Fine, then I can’t wait for tonight then. (smirk)

Jihoon: What are you saying…?

Seungcheol: Well, Seunghoonnie want a little sibling for him. His lonely and want a friend to play. (Kiss her cheek)

Jihoon: Seunghoon can’t talk. It’s you who want it.

Seungcheol: That’s my girl. (Ruffle her hair)Come, let’s go to them. They must be waiting.

Jihoon: Wait…

Seungcheol: Why?

Jihoon: Let me calm down first. It’s your fault...

Seungcheol: You look cute when you blush.

Jihoon: Shut up.

Seungcheol: Hey wait up.

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    A few years later, everyone busy with something at an event. It’s Chan’s wedding, he seriously ask the girl, Yeri who apparently is his sister’s friend who work together at the café. He likes her ever since she helps him with studies during college. One day, he asks his brother-in-law if he could ask her out. She agrees and went several date before Chan brave enough to ask marry her. So here they are the big day of them both.

Chan: Hyung, I’m nervous.

Mingyu: Relax, Everything going to be fine. Take a deep breath and slowly take it out.

Hanbin: Wow, nice advice there. You should use it during your wedding ages ago.

Seungcheol: I know right, I remember he almost faint because of his panic and said what if Wonwoo can’t accept him.

Mingyu: Shut up…

Then, Seohyun come with her daughter, Seulgi.

Hanbin: Is there anything, dear?

Seohyun: Nothing. Just searching for Seungcheol.

Seungcheol: Why searching for me, noona?

Seohyun: Jihoon looking for you. She’s at her room.

Seungcheol went to the said room and find Jihoon with their daughter, Jihyun 3months old with a sleepy Seunghoon, 4years old boy.

Seungcheol: Hey….

Jihoon: Sorry, didn’t see you coming just now.

Seungcheol: Looking for me?

Jihoon: Ah, yes. Just want to ask where you put Jihyun’s bag. Minah unnie told me you put it here.

Seungcheol: Ah, I forget to tell you.

Jihoon: It’s ok. I’ve just given her milk and change her clothes. Can you change Seunghoon’s shirt, please.

Seungcheol: Sure.

Seungcheol wake his son up.

Seungcheol: Seunghoon-ah. Wake up. Daddy wants to change your shirt.

Seunghoon: Daddy… (Cry)

Seungcheol: Why Hoonie?

Seunghoon: I’m hungry… (Pout)

Seungcheol: Ok. But first Hoonie need to change first, and then we will eat.

Seunghoon: Mummy and Jihyun?

Seungcheol: They will come with us, now let’s go buddy.

Seungcheol change Seunghoon shirt and wear him a new one. Jihoon already wait for them outside.

Seunghoon: Mummy…

Jihoon: Hoonie awake already

Seunghoon: Neh, Mummy…

Seungcheol: His hungry already…

Jihoon: Oh, really. Let’s go then. We let him eat first then…

The family went to the place where there have food. They found Mingyu and Wonwoo already ate at there.

Seunghoon: Aunt Wonwoo… (Run to her)

Wonwoo: Hoonie… (Hug him)

Jihoon: Seunghoon-ah, you said you’re hungry; the food is here not at Aunt Wonwoo.

Seunghoon: Yes, Mummy.

Mingyu: His act like Seungcheol hyung. Childish…

Wonwoo: If food, its Jihoon unnie.

Seungcheol: Why are you guys here?

Mingyu: Minwoo and Wooseok want to eat first. I’m also hungry, so here we are.

Wonwoo: You aren’t eaten Seungcheol Oppa?

Seungcheol: I will get it later. Seunghoon want to eat and Jihoon want to eat later and Jihyun is a sleep now.

Wonwoo: Let me carry her, Oppa while you get your food.

Seungcheol: Thanks, Wonwoo-ah. I’m ok not that hungry at the moment.

Jihoon: Sit down, Hoonie…

Seunghoon: Yes, Mummy.

Mingyu: Hoonie, What are you eating?

Seunghoon: I’m eating chicken. Uncle wants some?

Jihoon: Out all the food display there, he only wants chicken.

Wonwoo: Same for Minwoo, unnie.

Then, the place getting so much people at there.

Mingyu: I guess it’s time for the wedding to start.

Wonwoo: I guess so.

Jihoon: Hoonie, Are you done?

Seunghoon: Wait, Mummy. I almost finish the water.

Jihoon: Ok, drink slowly. Mummy will wait Hoonie.

Seunghoon: Done, Mummy.

Jihoon: Good boy. (Kiss his cheek)

They enter the place where Chan is waiting for Yeri to come in. They sat beside each other with the other family.

Seungcheol: I remember when we are married. (Whisper to Jihoon)

Jihoon: Really? How are you feeling?

Seungcheol: I feel nervous because hoping that you will accept me for who I am, then feel stun because I see a beautiful angel coming towards me and of course happy because you become mine now. (Kiss her cheek)

Jihoon: Me too, Oppa.

Seungcheol: Oh, I also remember our first night.

Jihoon: Yah!! (hit his shoulder)

Seungcheol: Just kidding…

Chan and Yeri officially becomes husband-wife. Omma Jeonghan cry because her son already marry, now.

Chan: Noona….

Jihoon: Hey, behave Chan. Remember you already be someone’s husband.

Chan: Ops. Sorry.

Jihoon: Congratulation, Chan-ah.

Wonwoo: Aigoo, My favorite baby already marry.

Chan: Noona, I’m not your favorite baby.

Jihoon: Of course you are. You are the only our favorite dongsaeng.

Wonwoo: Jihoon, right. You our favorite dongsaeng.

Mingyu: Congrats, Chan-ah. If you need some secret during first night, just ask me and Seungcheol hyung.

Wonwoo: Oppa… (Hit his shoulder)

Seunghoon: Uncle Chan is handsome.

Chan: Oh, Thank you Hoonie. You’re handsome too.

Yeri: His cute..

Seunghoon: Hye, Aunt Yeri…

Yeri: Hello, there. You both cute. (ruffle Minwoo and Seunghoon hair)

Minwoo: Noona, you’re pretty.

Yeri: Thank you, Minwoo.

Chan: Ok, That’s enough you too…

Jihoon: It looks like Chan already jealous of his nephew towards his wife.

Wonwoo: I agree with you. Hey, let’s take a picture of all of us.

Mingyu: Here, Let me take the picture.

Jihoon: Hoonie, Come to Mummy. We want to take a picture…

Seunghoon: I want daddy to carry me…

Seungcheol: Ok, then. I carry Hoonie, you carry Jihyun.

Jihoon: Ok, here. Gave Jihyun to me.

Seunghoon: Daddy…

Seungcheol: Come here, buddy. (Lift Hoonie)

Mingyu: Smile…

Omma Jeonghan: Don’t forget about me and Appa.

Chan: Omma, hurry...

Mingyu: Ok, ready. Smile…

 

The End..

 

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Hye guys,I want to said Happy New Year,Hope 2018 will be your great year and be a better person each day.Wish all your sadness replace with happiness.I'm really sorry of my other chapter with grammar,I'm still trying to learn.See you on my other story...I will always supports you all.Bye-bye...Fxgene sign of the story of "Bow The Playboy" :D

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A7la3arbaweya #1
Chapter 13: I really like your story but it has alot of grammer mistakes and it's one of the things that makes me not wanting to read a story but because of your interesting plot I continued reading it until the latest chapter . SO I hope you will fix the Grammer or have an editor.
RJ_kpop
#2
Chapter 11: The fluff...its soooo fluffy!!!
hamizah #3
Does the fanfic based on malay novel called 'tundukkan playboy itu'?
krunkk98
#4
Chapter 9: what the?? doyoon so cruel T-T
RJ_kpop
#5
Chapter 9: Fudge Doyoon! She's insane! Same as that Mr.Wonho jerk! They don't need to enter prison, they need to enter a mental institution I SWEAR! Jihoon needs to stop worrying over Doyoon's threat. I'm sure Seungcheol will make sure for that not to happen. And finally! Meanie is coming to LIFEU! XD thanks for the update author-nim! Also! the twins interaction is so cute! I hope you make more scenes of them in the future author-nim! ^^ Fighting! <3
RJ_kpop
#6
Chapter 8: I love this story! BTW Jihoon is so cute! maybe you can add Meanie author-nim. XD just suggesting! Fighting! <3
hatsugoii
#7
Chapter 3: oh so it was a gender-bender kind of story? lol I was confused at first (coz I'm not a fan of seventeen) and I just realized the ship tags hahaha

up until this chapter, I think the story is cute but I don't understand the main plot here hehe...ah never mind that. just go on with your current plot hehe.
oh and, I don't want to be rude but I'm quite sensitive when it comes to spelling...and a bit of grammar. I'm not a perfect person either and I often make mistakes on that particular part (;^•^) but in your case, pls fix it. I had been on your shoes, and it hurts when people often complains about your grammar s.

Maybe I shall recommend you some good workshops to improve your skills? haha. You deserve to be a good writer, I know. I'm rooting for you fellow author ^^

I just came out of nowhere and I happened to stumbled on your fic. The title caught my interest first. Are you Malaysian? the title seem familiar tho.
krunkk98
#8
Chapter 4: It really cute xD
Casandra #9
Chapter 4: heii..i really like ur story plot its nice..but i need to tell you to recheck again about your spelling and grammar..and also your writing style..as i read your story there are many grammartical error and spelling mistake..and change your writing style abit..its kinda weird reading like (example/character: blahblah) like that...why dont u change..the story is good and everything..only thats the problem..i hope you dont feel offense on what i say..hwaitingg..
reeyoon #10
Chapter 3: I love jicheol