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Review
First impression [2/5] : uhm... this isn't really my cup of tea? i'll elaborate at the points below!
Font [5/10] : the fonts can be a llllot better! those look like the default windows font you can really get effortlessly. but then again this was from 2013 and we all at 2013
Mood [10/15] : not angsty for me, other than the fact that all characters look sad lmao but the graphic itself isn't really telling a story... like. it feels like pictures of people and stuff thrown inside the frame.
Coloring [5.5/10] : err... the coloring looks like the ancient instagram filter everyone had in their old instagram post, giving off the 'cheap' vibe, not the high class expensive poster vibe. the character pictures' colorings are different from each other too. can be improved!
Placement [5/10] : hmm this placement is also not my cup of tea as well? like i said earlier, it gives a strong vibe that the pictures are just thrown in effortlessly, even if i know the fact is not like that hahaha. and also, the title placement is odd too! it can really be improvised a lot better.
Blending+technique [11/20] : i... really don't fancy the squares behind the characters? yes i get it the poster looks so meh without those but those are... awkward? and the blending, the corners of wooyoung and hongki (ARENT THEY WOOYOUNG AND HONGKI IM FLASHBACKING SO HARD) are just poorly erased and not even blended. there are no connections between the characters and the book stock photo.
Resources [3/5] : the more i see this, the more i realize that less than 5 resources were used. am i right? hmm this feels pretty lackluster and can really be improved...
Originality [4/10] : i think i looked at a lot of graphics like this back then?
Overall look [9/15]
Total score: 2+5+10+5.5+5+11+3+4+9= 54.5/100
Personal comment: hello, thank you for requesting! i think i tolerate this because this is from 2013 HAHAHA i was terrible too at 2013. please design again, 5 years is a very long hiatus!
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