+ bottleofdreams
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bottleofdreams
Review
First impression [5/5] : This!!! give! me! good! mood!! And I like this kind of graphics, so it gives me a nice impression. It's so tidy and HD too??
Font [8.5/10] : Is it antrokas? I really like the title font choice, and the colors in it. The only thing that bugs me a little is the sub-title on top of the title, that you even need to change some of the colors in order for it to be able to be seen. I suggest you to probably put it beside the letter L instead.
Mood [11/15] : I feel the light and (very slightly) dreamy genre, but somehow, not the soft. Maybe add a softing texture or reduce the contrast just a little bit, or maybe filling up the white empty spots can help?
Coloring [8.5/10] : The girl in front might needs to be a bit brighter, right? But overall, it looks really professionally made and decent!
Placement [9.5/10] : Placement looks fine for a collage edit (which is not easy)! Maybe I'd like to move the subtitle somewhere else, but it's no big deal.
Blending [15/15] : Pictures look good together, not commenting a lot!
Resources [18/20] : The picture choices and the textures look nice, except the papers/music sheet on the right that somehow looks a little blurry and off the picture for me.
Overall look [14/15]
Total score: 5+8.5+11+8.5+9.5+14 = 89.5/100
Personal comment: First of all, I am sorry if it is too harsh or it's an inaccurate review o/ and p.s..... hold on, we know each other once from instagram fanacc, right? HAHAHAH thank you for requesting here, and you are already one of the nicest graphic designers! Good luck and stay creative! -asdfghjm15
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