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Shirotakashi
Review
First impression [3.5/5] : My first impression was actually 'is that jhope' HAHAHA I will make it clear in the rubrics below!
Font [7/10] : Title's font is nice and it's okay. Maybe the 'h' letter is just a little weird when it's touching the 'girl', but it's fine. The quote, however, is barely able to be seen and is so unclear. Change the color or the font, maybe?
Mood [13/15] : I can feel the mood, props to you!
Coloring [6/10] : The color somehow sort of aches my eyes and it feels so anticlimax(?) since it's very very purple from top to bottom. It looks so monotone, and I would not be attracted seeing that kind of poster with that coloring. I suggest you not to make it so purple like you put a whole purple layer on top of everything.
Placement [7.5/10] : Placement is pretty nice, just the quote placement that bugs me, but no big deal. Also, the faces' placement looks a bit... off?
Blending [10/15] : The 3d effect you put on their face is too much, it looks like jessica (that is jessica, right) has an additional eye. I learned that the 3d effect should NOT be too much moved from the original place, you get what I mean? Other than that, the money on her face is just a little bit awkward. Also, what is that on jhope's forehead, the brush??
Resources [16/20] : The brush or texture that separates them is a little weird.
Overall look [12/15]
Total score: 3.5+7+13+6+7.5+10+12 = 75/100
Personal comment: First of all, I am sorry if it is too harsh or it's an inaccurate review o/ There is still a lot room of improvement, and you can experiment more in so many things! Thank you for requesting here! -asdfghjm15
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