+ ex-mermaid
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ex-mermaid
Review
First impression [5/5] : The poster is somehow funny HHAHA and it gives off a fun vibe, that refreshes me!!
Font [8.5/10] : The title font really screams fluff, so it's cool! Just that the credit isn't really readable. Maybe add the spacing or use another font aside it? The font in the speech bubble feels so shoujo manga, so suitable.
Mood [15/15] : It is really happy and fun and bright and bubbly (and funny for me)
Coloring [7.5/10] : At the first glance it looks all fine, but you need to check the details out too. Sehun's (is that sehun i am so... unupdated) hands are so much more tanned than his face, that you might need to do some edits on it. But overall, it's already pretty fine.
Placement [8/10] : The overall placement is already fine, just that IU is a little bit awkward or 'off the frame', but I think it's more into the blending rubric.
Blending+technique [15/20] : First of all let's say yay that the technique rubric is newly added HAHAHA. The thing is that, I still feel that IU is off the frame since her body esp. legs don't seem to belong in the picture. Adding shadow might be necessary, because she looks like she's sorta flying? If it's hard to edit a lot, just simply give another layer behind the shoes and dab a v v v transparent black shadow. Sehun's body render too, the white trace from rendering is still there and it can be fixed.
Resources [4/5] : Background and body to manip is suitable.
Originality [8/10] : Title and story concept is not a really mainstream one, however, the bobble heads are pretty famous already.
Overall look [12/15]
Total score: 5+8.5+7.5+8+4+8+12= 83/100
Personal comment: First of all, I am sorry if it is too harsh or it's an inaccurate review o/ For designing in phone, I think this is already so so good?? Since the only phone edit I can do is only filter editing for instagram HAHA I suggest that you do not quit editing!! Saving up for laptop might be necessary for so many things, and not only for editing esp when you are still studying. Good luck and do well! -asdfghjm15
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