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Review
First impression [4/5] : This kind of graphic is around my favorite style, so I have a pretty good first impression seeing it. However, there are several things I would like to point out about the poster.
Font [7.8/10] : The font choice is good, however, some things bug me such as the credit that is a little hard to read. The quote, also, has weird punctuation, but I'll let it pass.
Mood [9/15] : I feel the angst, but violence? You might need to put some attributes that show the violence genre, since it feels just angsty.
Coloring [8/10] : Props to you that the coloring is pretty cool. The contrast is a little too high, though.
Placement [9/10] : No comment in this field, the placement is good!
Blending [11/15] : On the sides of Suzy's body, such as her (or hips?) in the second image, there is still some annoying black outline. I learned that not all renders are tidy from the makers, sometimes you need to tidy them up by yourself. Also, if you zoom into the face of the first pic, near her lips there are still some white trace. The texture blending and all are cool.
Resources [18/20] : The resources are good, and the coloring is pretty cool.
Overall look [12/15]
Total score: 4+7.8+9+8+9+11+12 = 78.8/100
Personal comment: First of all, I am sorry if it is too harsh or it's an inaccurate review o/ Wheee, you get more than 75, congratulations! There are still a lot room of improvement, especially in coloring and blending. Notice small details, and you'll be good! -asdfghjm15
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